Balenor's Sweetheart - Hayley's Story

Balenor's Sweetheart - Hayley's Story

In this story, meet a young mage by the name of Hayley Suntora, and her story of how she became the last hope in saving her kingdom from Mosino and the Void.

published on August 19, 201452 reads 17 readers 21 not completed
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Chapter 2.
Chapter 1: Free

Chapter 1: Free

(In this chapter, and all chapters that are still to come, Hayley is now 16.)

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Hayley
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Ever since the death of my parents, the castle gates have been secured so I can't leave. Apparently, they can't risk if I die either, now that I am the only Suntora alive. But is all this REALLY necessary? Just for one girl?
But today, as I wake up, I realise: today is my 16th birthday. I am finally allowed outside the palace barriers. Finally able to see the kingdom once again.
A new dress has been set out for me to wear when I finally leave the castle doors and once again walk around my beautiful kingdom. I put on the dress, and straighten my hair, adding a glistening blue accessory for that extra glow.
But it still hasn't sunk into my head. I will finally be free, the moment I walk out of those gates. Every citizen will once again be able to see me, and I can see them. I am very excited for it.
Before I leave my room, I take a final look outside my window. As many citizens as possible are gathering by the gates to see the moment where I can finally step outside. The moment I will be visible to my kingdom once again.
Though I may look calm on the outside, I am shaking inside.

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The guards are about to open the gates. I count backwards from 10 in my head to try and calm down.
Ten... nine... eight...
I don't know if I can do this...
Seven... six... five...
No, I can do this. I have to.
Four... three...
For my parents. I'll do it for them.
Two...
I've never let them down. And I certainly won't now.
One...

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The doors open, and I step outside to the roaring of the crowd, a huge smile on my face.
I am finally outside. And I feel so relieved.
An archer approaches me, and hands me a bouquet of roses, to welcome me back into the kingdom. I smile at her, and she walks away.
But then I realise something important. Something more important than my birthday.
Now that I am free, I can find out what it was my parents started when they were alive.
And I can finish it.
I vow this, right now. The Void will pay. Yaros may no longer be the King of the Void, but I will still avenge my parents.
And I will never break this vow.
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Comments (21)

AlwaysBeInfinite
This new chapter..... Is too freaking... BOSS TO BE TRUE!!! XD
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on August 22, 2014
Silestra7
Name: Shilena
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Personality: Calm, Outgoing, Loyal
Loyal or Traitor: Traitor See More▼
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Weiss_Schnee
Sounds good.
I really need to make a chapter for the Void's POV now XD
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Silestra7
BTW, Shilena's a spy for the Voids. If she is wandering around, she has blue eyes from contacts.
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on August 22, 2014
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on August 22, 2014
Cristallite
Could you please write more? And you know my oc from the game and rp page..Im addicted to wartune now..
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on August 22, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
Name: Element
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Class: Archer
Personality: Brave. courageous, Smart, deadly, and serious See More▼
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Yes, she will be loyal to her.
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on August 20, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
One more thing I need to know, which I've just added into the form in the story.
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on August 20, 2014
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on August 20, 2014
XxSiderionxX
Name: Alex
Age: 16
Gender: female
Class: knight
Personality: brave,smart,cool, funny
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Weiss_Schnee
Would she be loyal to Hayley or not?
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XxSiderionxX
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Cristallite
Could Autumn be in there please?
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Cristallite
You already know my character. Frpm the page and gams
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on August 22, 2014
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on August 20, 2014
RoseHeart
Ca you use Katerina all the stuff is on the Wartune rp page you made
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Weiss_Schnee
Sure, but I can't put that she's Hayley's sister.
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RoseHeart
Please well ca they at least be cousins and Kat can be from Haley's mom's side of the family so technically she wouldn't be a suntora
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on August 20, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Well I put in the story that Hayley's the only Suntora left.
So if I say that Kat is her sister, people are gonna send hate mail.
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on August 20, 2014
RoseHeart
Why not? could you include it at some point later in the story
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Awesome!! Plz right more!
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on August 20, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
Love it!!! XD
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on August 20, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on August 19, 2014