Falling For You (1)

Falling For You (1)

Sesa was the most popular person in town, even for an emo. Sports car, social butterfly, caring family, friends aplenty. Then he met Elise, his polar opposite: A POS car, a single dad at his wits end, anti-social, and only her adoptive sister Akiko to call on. Who knows what will happen when they finaly admit to being in love with each other?

published on May 12, 201780 reads 13 readers 84 completed
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Chapter 4.
Dad

Dad

Sesa drove up to the ratty apartment building, getting eyed from the local gang-bangers and drug dealers.

"She lives here? Man, no wonder she doesnt talk to anyone."

It wasnt exactly a bad nieghborhood, but it was bad enough to where if you left your window unlocked, you could get robbed.

Elise unlocked the door to her apartment and found her dad shuffling through the bills and his colledge work.
"Hey, Dad." She says quietly, setting her backpack on the rack. He glances up, then gives a small grunt.

"That bad?" She asks, sitting across from him.
Dad shakes his head, rubbing his temples and grumbling avout the rent being too damned high.
"Dad, I have a boy coming over. Please dont.... You know... Antagonize him. Please?"

Dad looked at her, then grumbled sure, as long as it wasnt an Okomota.
"Uhm... About that..." she started when the doorbell rang. He stood up, then walked to the door, opening it and standing before a young blonde male, about 18.

"Hello, is Elise here?" Sesa asks, smiling at the stranger. "She told me to come by when I had the chance, so I thought why not now?"
Mr. Akito looked at Sesa, then adjusted his glasses.
"And whom are you, if I may ask?" He croaked, eyeing the boy.

Elise tensed as Sesa replied with, "Sesa Okomota." making her dad stand at attention.
"Arent you Mariam Okomota's kid?"
"Yes sir, I am. Why?"
Mr. Akito crossed his arms.

"You listen to me, boy." He began, using the same voice he had used in Afghanistan, "You mistreat my daughter in any way, and Ill tear you to shreds. Make her cry, and youll regret it. To make a long story short, your already walking on eggshells being a dambed Okomota, and you screw up one time, youll pay. But Im doing this because I love my daughter more than I hate your retched family. Understand?"

Sesa wanted to scoff at the man. He didnt scare him, but he none the less replied with, "Yes sir." as a sign of respect.
"Good. Shes in the kitchen." Mr. Akito says, walking back to the table and sitting down like nothing happened.

"Hey." Elise says, smiling abd moving a strand of hair out of her eyes.
"Hey. Ready to go?" He asks, smiling and keeping the surprise in mind. She nodded, slowly taking his hand in her own as they left.

Mr. Akito smirked.

As long as he kept her happy, he didnt give a damn if the boy was an Okomota. He had been rude just to keep Mrs. Akinson, of whom was down the hall at the time, from gossiping to her knitting club that he had gotten soft, which he most certaintly wouldnt have.

The REAL probpem was going to be telling her that she would have to move in with her aunt soon.
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The_Mad_Hatress
Great story!!!!!!!
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on October 04, 2017
TylerWay
Plot twist!!! YEAH!!!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Also making a new story
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xXEmo_KingXx
Now shes the one with the bad attitude
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
okay!
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on May 16, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
K! Brb!
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
Yep, yandere is always the answer
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on May 16, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Idk yet. Definately romance though. And yandere. Always yandere
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
What is it about???!!
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
That was nice. Akiko and Bana, so cute
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xXEmo_KingXx
^-^
Ttyl
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TylerWay
Okay!!!
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Three whole days
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
But the tomorrow has to come
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xXEmo_KingXx
Que?
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
SHE IS MOVING AWAY NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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xXEmo_KingXx
Eats popcorn*
What could happen next?
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TylerWay
Then it is a magnificent idea
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
The page you subscribed to.
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
What could this magnificent idea be? O-o
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Bows*
I have an idea
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Welcome! @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
And back
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
okay!
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
XD
Lunch brb
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
HOW YOU KNOW?????
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xXEmo_KingXx
Voooodooooooo
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TylerWay
XD @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
I'll tell you.......MAGIC
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xXEmo_KingXx
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How..?!? Thats what I was planing!!!
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
They fall deeply in love, and then one day, Elise disappears. And Sesa doesn't know where she is, so he looks for her desperately.
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Maybe she moves so Sesa follows her?
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SierraMWay
can u plz write more i rlly like ur stories me and my friend @TylerWay r addicted to them can u plz add more chapters to this one and Obsesion?
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TylerWay
I AM AN ADDICT TO THESE STORIES!!!! YEP THAT'S RIGHT PEOPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SierraMWay
YASSSSSSSS
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
TWINS!!!!!!!!!
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on May 15, 2017
SierraMWay
I am too tyler my amazing twin we need more of these!!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Maybe Ill write a second Obsession...
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SierraMWay
thank you so much @xXEmo_KingXx we love ur stories and this new one will be great
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Yayayayayayayayyaayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay
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xXEmo_KingXx
Ok, ok, after I finish up Falling For You
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SierraMWay
plz do u know u will have mine and @TylerWay read it so plz write some more
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xXEmo_KingXx
Maybe.
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SierraMWay
yasssssss plz
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TylerWay
DDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOO IIIIIIIIITTTTT
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SierraMWay
yess plz do
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TylerWay
Romeo an Juliet?
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xXEmo_KingXx
Kinda
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TylerWay
OH NOOOOOOOOOO.
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
Juuust wait.
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TylerWay
Evil laughs???? What could this mean!!!!!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Hehbe
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TylerWay
NIce!
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TylerWay
So much love!
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TylerWay
And Sesa asked her to marry him, so far this is a great romance story! @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
YOU WROTE THE CHAPTER YYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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TheBrokenMemories
DUDE
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TheBrokenMemories
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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on May 12, 2017
TylerWay
Once again. Lol
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TheBrokenMemories
Yep.................
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TylerWay
So many lols given
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on May 12, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
IT'S ZIANA TYLER
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TylerWay
I ask that everyday @a.amaducci1122
and XD too @xXEmo_KingXx
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TheBrokenMemories
WHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYY
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TylerWay
Okay I will.
*dying from happiness on inside*
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xXEmo_KingXx
Lol chill
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TylerWay
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYY
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TheBrokenMemories
EMO!!!
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TheBrokenMemories
I'm happy to see you!
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TheBrokenMemories
Meet you there my sweet!
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on May 12, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Of course.
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on May 12, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
NM, you? Wanna chat in "For us"?
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on May 12, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Dont know.
Anyways, whats up?
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TheBrokenMemories
Why should I be MAD at you?
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TheBrokenMemories
What's wrong?
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xXEmo_KingXx
I thought you would be angry at me...
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xXEmo_KingXx
Uh oh...
Hey, @a.amaducci1122
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