Ticci Toby

Ticci Toby

Toby is a boy who sees things not so good. He sees a slender looking man. No face, and pure pale. What does he do this next day? Will he EVER give up?

published on June 21, 2016137 reads 44 readers 8 not completed
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Chapter 2.

The man

Later on that day, I went to my window. It was getting dark, but a man stood there. He starred... Well, he couldn't he had no face. No eyes, mouth, but a nose without nostrils. My eyes widened and ran into the living room. "No! It's just my imagination!" I told myself, while slapping my head.
This guy was gonna haunt me. No matter what. I cried. My mother was not in the room to help. I couldn't call her name. I looked side to side, and saw my sister. She was dead. She died in a car crash a few years ago... I miss her. But I see her, in a form I don't want to see.
I fastly fall, but slowly back away. Her jaw dangled lower. You could see all her flesh. She disappeared and my mom rushed in. "Dear! Are you okay?" She asked.
I shook my head. "No! I saw..." I mummered.
My mom looked confused. "Saw what?" She asked.
"A man and..." I gulped. "Sis..." I slowly said.
"Her!? Wow, you are out of-" She said.
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Lucy_Heartfilia
I'm glad my sis is older. I don't need to babysit.
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on June 27, 2016
kori_minamato
Ya I feel better now (I hate babysitting my 3 year old sis she's a total tomboy)
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on June 27, 2016
Lucy_Heartfilia
Glad to hear, @kori_minamato
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on June 27, 2016
kori_minamato
Cool..... (I feel like I broke my leg)
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kori_minamato
It's like a tying when it pokes u n u start bleeding and if u stand on 1 leg for so long u r leg won't move anymore (I accidently steeped on the extra sharp pencil)
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kori_minamato
It's OK
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on June 27, 2016
Lucy_Heartfilia
Oh. Yeah. Sorry about that. ):
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