Once upon a night...

Once upon a night...

Okay so Im just gonna write something now and make sure i can run a good story before I start making Some characters Backstories

published on November 18, 20186 reads 6 readers 2 not completed
Theres a noise

Theres a noise

Misty was lying down listening to "Numb" By Linkin Park. Today she felt very numb and didn't want to do much of anything so she stared mistily at the ceiling lip syncing to the refrain of the song. Her eyes grey as mist and her hair white like snow. Then over her blasting music she heard something. It sounded more or less like a crash in the kitchen. She Took out her ear buds and got up. Gingerly placing her warm feet on the ice cold floor. She Grabbed a glass bottle and slowly moved down jumping at every noise and shadow. She Slunk into the kitchen and heard a voice. "well... If it isnt Misty" Then she got pinned against a wall.
A boy about 17 with dirty blonde hair and dark grey eyes. "Ngh!" Misty Tugged at her restraints and they grew tighter. Her wrists hurt, alot. "L-Lemme GO!" She hollered. The Boy laughed. "But Mist-y..." She looked in his eyes which were not grey any more but a Blood red shade. His hands went cold and Misty gasped. He wasn't human at all. He was but a mere demon. Then some one came through the front door. Misty seized the moment to knee this guy in the crotch.
He made a face that was quite weird like he was in pain yet he couldn't feel it. He let go of her giving Misty the perfect time to escape. "Misty?" a familiar  voice called. She knew who this was it was her mother calling her. She knew she couldn't let this guy escape so Misty took the bat off of the wall and ran back to the kitchen. She wielded the bat like it was a sword and then she Hit the impostor until the guy fled and disappeared. Her mother came in and saw Misty Panting and red faced. She dropped the things and ran over to comfort her girl. "M-mom... It was a demon..." Her mother hugged her and she pulled back from her mom's embrace. "He... broke in... a-and pushed me against a wall pinning me there" Tears came into her misty grey eyes.  Her mother held her tightly. "as long as he didnt hurt you Im good..." Misty was shaking in fear and adrenaline. "What if he comes back?"


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Okay so this is the frist one I would love some feedback please and thank you telling what I can Improve I ended here si I could build suspense Ill write more later.
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Jrenner
Pretty good other than the fact that the demon was SO weak. Demons irl would be much nastier
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Queenofshadows
yeah i know but itĺl be explained later
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