The Story of Five Nights at Freddy's: Mobian Style

The Story of Five Nights at Freddy's: Mobian Style

Come around and read the tale of Five Nights at Freddy's. This may be different than what you think, but it is good to read other people's beliefs. Some say one thing, some say another, but I say this...

published on January 11, 2015156 reads 35 readers 19 not completed
Chapter 1.
The Murder at Fredbear's Family Diner

The Murder at Fredbear's Family Diner

A bear animatronic, Freddy, rushed around the diner, giving cake to children at a birthday party. Another child, a white hedgecat sitting next to her brother, screamed out impatiently for some cake. The hedgecat beside her rolled his eyes as Freddy rushed over. Despite them, overall, everyone was having a great time. Except for one small boy...
   Gavin, a six-year-old hedgehog with light purple fur, stood crying. His hands and face were up against the window as he looked in, wanting to join the party. No one would let him in though. He just stood, watching, and crying.
   Suddenly, a purple car drove up to the diner and stopped, not parking however. A brown hedgehog with blue eyes stepped out. He approached Gavin coolly and calmly, with a devious hint of a smile. The little boy turned his head to look up at him. Freddy, inside the diner, also froze and turned his head towards the window... Right as the man pulled out a knife. Before the young boy could even scream, the hedgehog had sliced him open in one swift strike. The smile of the brown hedgehog widened as he rushed to his car and drove off...
   Gavin lay dead on the ground, bleeding out everywhere. The tracks of his tears still, and forever, visible on his face.
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Comments (19)

DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
NUUUUUUU!! DONT DO IT GURLZ!!!
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Chenj999
yeah!
BAD IDEA!
(how do u not notice he's not a robot?)
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Frostgoddess
(Well, she IS just a little kid)
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on January 05
Your_Average_Fangirl
DONT GO IN THERE ONICA! Dx
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on February 05, 2015
Lady_Artemis
DON'T GO IN IT'S A TRAP!!!!!
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Frostgoddess
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on February 03, 2015
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on February 02, 2015
staygold
EPIC!!
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staygold
Np 😋
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on January 25, 2015
Frostgoddess
Thanks
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on January 25, 2015
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on January 25, 2015
Your_Average_Fangirl
Make more! X3
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Frostgoddess
I will
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on January 23, 2015
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on January 22, 2015
TricksterOfLife
Awesome! :3
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on January 16, 2015
TheDarknessWithin
I like it!!
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on January 16, 2015
SnakesVenomSans
Hap is the owner? XD
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Frostgoddess
Yep XD
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on January 13, 2015
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on January 11, 2015
Lady_Artemis
THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME!
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on January 11, 2015
Frostgoddess
I NEED THREE TEENAGERS; ONE GIRL AND TWO BOYS
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Your_Average_Fangirl
You can use Tania! Tania is actually 14 her appearance is quite similar to onicas actually
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on January 11, 2015
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on January 11, 2015
Frostgoddess
I've gotten five chapters done, still working on it!
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on January 11, 2015