Melted (Frozen parody, using auditioned OCs)

Melted (Frozen parody, using auditioned OCs)

A brave hedgehog named Yamilette risk her life to save her sister Camille, the fire queen along with Sonic and his loyal companion, Wolfie to save the tragedy of summer to stay forever. Will summer stay? Will Yamilette lose her big sister?

published on July 17, 2014133 reads 33 readers 19 not completed
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Chapter 3.

The coronation

(First camera shot)
Duke of Weselton: I just love coronations. The fresh air...a NEW queen.
Soldier #1: Yup.
Soldier #2: I think you said that out loud...
Duke of Weselton: Well MY bad. I'm excited to be apart of this event.
(Next camera shot)
A blue hedgehog and a overgrown wolf just came out the pet store.
Older hedgehog: Who's a good boy?
Older wolf: *Wags tail*
Older hedgehog: Wolfie's a good boy!
Older wolf: *Eats a bacon strip*
Older hedgehog: Hey! You're on a diet! Split that!
Older wolf: *Spits out uneaten half*
Older hedgehog: *Breaks the piece and eats it*
(Next shot)
Little mobian fox: Mom! Why do I need to wear this?
Mother fox: Today is the coronation of the queen! You have to!
Little mobian fox: Aw come on! Can I please take this off?
(Next shot: In Yamilette's room)
Yamilette: *Snoring lightly*
*Someone knocks on the door*
Yamilette: *Perks head up* I'M AWAKE!
Soldier: It's just me princess. Hurry and fix yourself up!
Yamilette: I'll do it later...*Goes back to sleep*
Solder: The coronation starts today, majesty. You'll be late.
Yamilette: THE CORONATION?! OMG! I NEED TO GET DRESSED! *Clears throat* That's all I need to know for now...
Soldier:  (From the other side of the door) *Nods, smiles and walk away*
Yamilette: It's coronation day! *Quickly fixes herself and hugs a maiden from the hall* Can't you believe it?! It's coronation day!!!
*Starts singing as she runs through the hall*

The window is open, so's that door!
I didn't know they did that anymore!
Who knew we owned eight thousand salad plates?
For years, I roamed this empty halls,
Why have a ball room with no balls?
Finally they're opening up the gates!
They'll finally be real live people,
It'll be totally strange,
But wow, am I so ready for this change!
'Cause first time and forever,
They'll be music, they'll be light,
For the first time and forever,
I'll be dancing through the night
Don't know if I'm elated or gassy,
because I'm somewhere in that zone!
But for the first time and forever,
I won't be alone!
*Picks up baby chaos*
I can't wait to meet everyone at the coronation!
What if I met the one?

(Back at the castle)
Tonight, imagine me, gown and all,
Fetchingly draped against the wall,
The picture of sophisticated grace.
I suddenly see him standing there,
A beautiful stranger, tall and fair,
I wanna stuff some chocolate in my face!
Then we laugh and talk all evening,
which is totally bizzare.
Nothing like the life I've lead so far!
For the first time in forever,
they'll be magic, they'll be fun,
for the first time in forever,
I could be noticed by someone,
and I know it is totally crazy,
To dream I'd find romance!
But for the first time in forever,
at least I've got a chance!

(Camille looking at the window with doubt)
Camille: Don't let them in, Don't let them see,
Be the good girl you'll always have to be!
Conceal, don't feel.
Put on a show,
make one wrong move and everyone will know!
(Crossover of Camille and Yamilette)

Yamilette: I know it all ends tomorrow,
So it has to be today
'Cause for the first time in forever
For the first time in forever
Nothing's in my way!

*Two people carrying a throne bump into Yamilette*
Yamilette: HEY! AHH! *Falls into the boat and nearly fall to the water but a foot holds the boat from tilting*
*A black and red hedgehog speaks from the throne*
Dark hedgehog: *Whispering* You two are idiots...
Unknown servants: Uh...um..sorry, majesty.
Dark hedgehog: Charmy...Hector...put me down.
Both: *Set him down*
Dark hedgehog: I'm sorry. Let me help you up. *Smiles*
Yamilette: *Daydreams into his eyes*
Dark hedgehog: Are you ok?
Yamilette: Um, yes! I am. *Brushes dust off and stands on the boat* Totally! Nothing wrong! .....Am I weirding you out?
Dark hedgehog: Not at all...*Bows* I am Prince Shadow.
Yamilette: Princess Yamilette or just Yamilette. *Giggles*
Hector: *Whispers to Charmy* Such a weirdo...
Charmy: *Nods without saying a word*
Shadow: *Walks over to the boat* Now continue your day. I don't want to spoil it.
Yamilette: *Walks out from the boat then daydreams* You're so dreamy for a prince.
Shadow: *Smiles as he's still standing on the boat*
Hector: *Accidently removes foot from the boat to turn and look at Yamilette*
Shadow: What the- AHHH! *Falls to the water and sticks head from the water to growl at Hector*
Hector: Um, my bad...Majesty.
Shadow: *Gets out and makes fists and then looks away trying to stay calm* Prepare the throne...
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD cool!
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ZodiacAnimeFreak
cool and awsome!
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on August 13, 2014
Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Just added this to my favorites. PLZ WRITE MORE!!!
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on August 13, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on August 02, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more!!
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on July 21, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome write more!
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ellotherelove
Awesome!!!
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on July 19, 2014
XxSiderionxX
:DLove it
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on July 18, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
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on July 17, 2014
Mstereo
Make more plz its amazing
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on July 17, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Love it make more chapthers :D
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on July 17, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Sad!!! :((
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Obese_Doggo_boi
I know....:(
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Fiendish_Heathen
I'm Almost In Tears
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ellotherelove
continue please
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on July 17, 2014
Cristallite
Cool!
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on July 17, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome story hope you make more chapthers :D
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Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome!!!!
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