Melted (Frozen parody, using auditioned OCs)

Melted (Frozen parody, using auditioned OCs)

A brave hedgehog named Yamilette risk her life to save her sister Camille, the fire queen along with Sonic and his loyal companion, Wolfie to save the tragedy of summer to stay forever. Will summer stay? Will Yamilette lose her big sister?

published on July 17, 2014133 reads 33 readers 19 not completed
Chapter 1.

Ever since (Part 1)

Yamilette was excited to awake her sister from bed, she couldn't sleep and wait for dawn so she zipped to her room.
Yamilette: Pssssst! Camille! Wake up!
Camille: *Sleeping pleasantly* It's 12 o'clock in the morning. Go back to sleep.
Yamilette: I can't! My eyes refuse to shut, see? *Points to eyes*
Camille: Thats nice. *Turns away and sleeps*
Yamilette: -_- I sometimes wonder if you even care...
Camille: *Sleeping*
Yamilette: *Pounces on Camille and shakes her* Camille...
Camille: Fine! I've had it! What am I going to do with you?!
Yamilette: Make a sand castle?
Camille: *Smiles* Sound cool to me!
Yamilette and Camille both ran out the bedroom and downstairs in the living room in their mansion. They were playing happily.
Camille: Hey Yamilette, look at this!
Camille made fire in her hands using pyrokinesis.
Camille: Isn't that cool?!
Yamilette: WOW!
Camille: I know, right? Look at this!
Camille snapped her fingers and made a mobian citizen out of sand.
Camille: Look Yamilette, her name is Star! She's a wolf!
Yamilette: I love you Star! *Hugs her affectionately* :3
Camille: Think fast!
Yamilette: Huh?
*Camille throws sand at Yamilette and Yamilette laughs*
Yamilette: *Laughing* I got some in my hair! *Wipes off and still laughing*
*Sees a glass poodle* Hey, whats this?
Camille: *Gasps* No! Put that down! That was the glass poodle daddy gave me to treasure!
Yamilette: C'mon Camille, I got good grip! I'm not butterfingers like daddy is...
Camille: I said put it down!
Yamilette: Can I look at it? *Looses grip and it falls to the ground, broken*
Camille: Yamilette! Look what you did!
Yamilette: I-I didn't mean it!
Camille: *Aura surrounds her with fire formed in her hands* You don't know how much that means to me! It's all your fault that my poodle is broken!
Yamilette: *Looking scared* I didn't mean it! You're scaring me!
Camille: *Going to her dark form* I wish you were never born!
Yamilette: *Crying and covering ears* LEAVE ME ALONE! *Black aura enter Yamilette's head*
Camille: *Smirks evily*
*The mother and father race down in panic*
Father: Camille! Stop! You're possessing her!
Camille: *Gives her father a evil glare with her red eyes and a evil smirk*
Yamilette: *Faints*
Mother: *Races to Yamilette* Yamilette!
Yamilette: .....
Camille: *Turns normal* N-no...
Mother: *Holding Yamilette crying*
Father: Oh god...*Looks through library*
Mother: *Watches nervously*
Father: *Picks up a book and map falls out*

*The family quickly went to their chariot and rode off, tracks of fire were on the ground. A young wolf  and a young blue hedgehog came out the bushes*
Wolf pup: Grr...Yip!
Young hedgehog: Wolfie! Go after that Chariot!
Wolfie (Young pup): *Chases after chariot with the young hedgehog following behind on the sled*

*Trolls made out of rock and moss approach the family as the cheif approach Yamilette and the mother*
Cheif: Why do you come here?
Mother: My daughter...she gotten possessed and...fainted.
*Cheif studies her as Wolfie and the young hedgehog are in the background observing*
Cheif: Good thing it's her head because if it was her heart, she'll never think the same again.
Camille: *Looks away in shame*
Cheif: I just need to erase the memory that all of this happened and then she'll be healed.

(To be continued)
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD cool!
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on June 14, 2015
ZodiacAnimeFreak
cool and awsome!
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on August 13, 2014
Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Just added this to my favorites. PLZ WRITE MORE!!!
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on August 13, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on August 02, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more!!
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on July 21, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome write more!
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on July 20, 2014
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ellotherelove
Awesome!!!
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on July 19, 2014
XxSiderionxX
:DLove it
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on July 18, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
WRITE MORE
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on July 17, 2014
Mstereo
Make more plz its amazing
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on July 17, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Love it make more chapthers :D
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on July 17, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Sad!!! :((
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Obese_Doggo_boi
I know....:(
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Fiendish_Heathen
I'm Almost In Tears
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
ellotherelove
continue please
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on July 17, 2014
Cristallite
Cool!
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on July 17, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome story hope you make more chapthers :D
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on July 17, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome!!!!
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on July 17, 2014