Just Poems And Stuff

self explanatory~ this is just a place I type down random thoughts and the like for all the see~ feel free to comment as it shows at least some people are interested~

published on May 18, 201467 reads 18 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 8.

A Gentle Push

A beautiful sun rising in the sky, clearing away the darkness and leaving a lovely view for a girl to take in, she stares out into the distance, desiring to be taken in by all the beauty that her eyes gaze upon. However her feet don't move, she just stands there staring, she turns away from the view to stare back at a bunch of smiling faces, she feels no reason to leave them behind, she turns back to gaze at the sky, only to feel a hand placed upon her back, she then felt a gentle push, she turns to try and see who pushed her... As she fell off the edge of the cliff she was standing on the entire time, only to see there wasn't just one hand. The preasure, the stress, it will all be over soon...
She slowly closed her eyes as the scene she desired to be a part of was about to take her away from everything she wanted to escape from, just for her to open her eyes once more to find she was still standing on that cliff, staring once more at the sun rising, her suffering isn't over just yet. She continues to look out into the sky without gazing back to the faces as she thinks to herself, they still need me.
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Comments (5)

Frostgoddess
You're really good at writing poetry. and expressing emotion through poetry. :( (I wish I could help you.....)
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on August 01, 2014
Elleyd
I see you. I see the little girl who needs help and you know my hand is always outstretched for you.
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on June 13, 2014
Paraboilc
to*
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on May 25, 2014
Paraboilc
don't you dare kill yourself, there is no reason for it! when there is nothing but darkness there is always light co brighten the world around you!
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on May 25, 2014
Elleyd
:(( I would cry if you died... Please don't think this about yourself.
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on May 18, 2014