Just Poems And Stuff

self explanatory~ this is just a place I type down random thoughts and the like for all the see~ feel free to comment as it shows at least some people are interested~

published on May 18, 201467 reads 18 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 12.

Falling through hues

Falling through a sky that isn't so blue, a existence of many hues, visions of clouds going past, a hand outreached, the clouds take the shape of many faces, all with a lovely smile upon them, reaching out yet hesitant to touch, fears that the clouds may actually leave an impact, the freefall continues through a sky of many hues, no end within view...
A blissful fall of hesitation turns into a nightmarish decent as the clouds begin drifting away, what was once thoughts of concern and doubt turns into fear, reaching and grasping as the sky darkens, the clouds drifting out of sight, a torrent of emotions as the freefall spirals out of control...
The sky becomes a storm, rain pouring down with flashes of light, were the clouds really clouds, is this really rain, tears flowing down the cheek as the fall continues in the endless sky, the struggle persists, but only for a moment as all the emotions slip away, a sky now blank and full of grey...
A sky without any hues, an existence one might not even consider true, nothing within view, is this even a sky anymore, eyes once opened now closed, a sense of endless dread starts to erode, the feeling of falling persists, but is this even falling anymore, as if time has stood still...
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Comments (5)

Frostgoddess
You're really good at writing poetry. and expressing emotion through poetry. :( (I wish I could help you.....)
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on August 01, 2014
Elleyd
I see you. I see the little girl who needs help and you know my hand is always outstretched for you.
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on June 13, 2014
Paraboilc
to*
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on May 25, 2014
Paraboilc
don't you dare kill yourself, there is no reason for it! when there is nothing but darkness there is always light co brighten the world around you!
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on May 25, 2014
Elleyd
:(( I would cry if you died... Please don't think this about yourself.
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on May 18, 2014