Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014289 reads 36 readers 16 not completed
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Chapter 6.
Carasolla, Dark Angel

Carasolla, Dark Angel

I gaze at the Dark Angel. She's the only one with a spare seat next to them I guess that's my spot.
"Stephania, you may sit next to Carasolla, the one at the back," My teacher tells me. I nod.
"Thank you," I say gratefully. I slowly walk down to the spare seat, eyeing my classmates. Everyone immediately starts talking. I almost forgot. I had the MOST talkative class in the WORLD. I reach Caraso - the Dark Angel. She looks at me and snarls.
"Hello Angel, how is above these days?" She asks. I pretend to look confused.
"What on Earth are you on about?" I question.
"Oh don't try and deny it, I know who you are Stephania Harriet Glaydon, and I know you have to try and not kill Dominick Eyekon, the guy who sits in front of you," Harriet is my middle name, after my grandmother, Harriet Glaydon. I look in front of me. There he is.
"Hey, Dom!" Carasolla calls. I sit down. Dominick spins around.
"Yeah?" He asks.
"This is Stephania Harriet Glaydon, she wants to be your friend," Carasolla explains. Oh, she's good.
"What?! NO I don't, Carasolla wants to be your friend, she said so herself," I say quickly.
"Well, Carasolla, you're creepy, so no thanks, but Stephania, you're alright," Dominick explains, then he turns back. Oh no.

I hurry into the girls bathroom, just as the light starts to dance around me. I shut my eyes. I'm gone.

I open eyes to see Eli standing in front of me.
"How was it?" Eli asks.
"One annoying Dark Angel, but that's pretty much it," I reply. Eli's face turns serious.
"This is bad,"
"Why?"
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ChocolerryPOP
Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
EyelessIngrid
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Sarbar1010
Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
NeonTiger
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Aliyss
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Jeweled_Feather
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014