Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014289 reads 36 readers 16 not completed
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Chapter 21.

Characters (Not a chapter!)

In this chapter I am going to give some background information and info on the characters you know so far. Enjoy!

Stephania Harriet Glaydon:
Hair Colour + length: Brown, Long.
Eye Colour: Sapphire Blue
Skin Tone: Pale
Age: Sixteen
Family: (Mum) Tayha Glaydon (Dad) Dough Glaydon
Stephania's family is on the poorer side of life, they still have enough for food, water and bills, but fear they will soon not even be able to afford the right food! Stephania will do anything to help her family get out of their situation, even though she's not very close with her parents. Stephania's grades are pretty decent and keeps up in school.

Dominick Harrison Eyekon
Hair Colour: Very Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Chocolate Brown
Skin Tone: Slightly Tanned
Age: Sixteen
Family: (Mum) Karen Eyekon (Dad) Yale Eyekon (Sister - Younger) Mia Eyekon
Dominick is very skilled, he can cook, play many sports, is very intelligent and can also (don't tell him I'm saying this, or he'll be embarrassed) :p Dominick is GREAT at sewing! He is loyal, charismatic yet also a bit sarcastic.

Eli Mason Pocheco
Hair Colour: Golden Blonde
Eye Colour: Turquoise Blue
Skin Tone: Quite Pale
Age: Seventeen
Family: (All of Eli's family is still alive) (Mum) Eleanor Pocheco (Dad) Tim Pocheco (Brother - Twin) Nathaniel (Nate) Pocheco
Eli died at the age of five because he contracted a fatal disease. He mostly stays by himself with a VERY small group of friends. He was raised by angels, yet his personality isn't very 'angelic'. When he was about ten, no one wanted to be seen with him because his wings were different. Most angels have white wings with silver streaks, whereas his are white, with strips of silver and gold. When he was fifteen, when he passed the 'test', he was cursed to never fly unless truly motivated.

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ChocolerryPOP
Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
EyelessIngrid
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Sarbar1010
Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
NeonTiger
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Aliyss
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Jeweled_Feather
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014