Demon's Gate

Demon's Gate

A demon and an angel get together...will they save the world and live, or fail, and die? Can they really accomplish an impossible task? Or will their comradeship break apart? Read this original book to find out!

published on August 30, 201521 reads 9 readers 8 not completed
Chapter 1.
Chapter 1 (Elizabeth)

Chapter 1 (Elizabeth)

This is my second book that I'm putting up because people don't want to check out my preview of "Dragon Child" so I'm making this instead. The picture is of Elizabeth and just imagine she has a black hoodie and jeans. Please enjoy my short first chapter, ya'll!
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          Not so long ago, in land quite near here, there lived a young girl who went unnoticed and seemed insignificant in the world. Only a couple people counted her small existence in those sad years. That was soon to change...

          "Elizabeth Aria Turner!" I froze in my tracks. I can't believe that I was caught so easily! I turned towards my inevitable doom.

          "Yes, Mother?"

          "Where do you think you are sneaking off to young lady?!" Mom stumbled into view, a wine bottle in hand. Her blond hair was a mess and her blue eyes seemed unfocused. I sighed and thought up a quick lie.

          "Just going to the store, Mother." Mom drank and my two brothers were drowning in work after Dad died and Daisy, my sister, older by four years, had run away. Mom didn't let me out of the house after that, so I had to sneak away whenever I could.

          "Goin' to the store, huh?," She took a swig of wine and gave me a calculating glare."Didn't you go to the store last week?" Damn. I forgot how clever she was, even when completely drunk.

          "Yes, but I forgot aspirin for your headaches." Nice comeback. Put that on my success list. She thought for a moment and then waved me out the door. Fresh air. The spring breeze wafted against my face as I ran down the sidewalk. I had to hurry. I was already late for my first day at boarding school. I didn't tell Mom about it because I knew she wouldn't approve of it. I felt bad about running away, but if I finished school here, I could get a job. I skidded around corners, my feet slapping the ground as I ran.

FLASHBACK
          I was playing in the backyard with my sister when the doorbell rang. I ran inside so I could open the door. A man in a black cloak gave me two letters and glided back down the street. One of the letters was addressed to my 15 year old self and the other was addressed to a 'Miss Daisy Turner'. Mine was whi5e with gold letters and hers was just a plain envelope with black ink. I ran to my room to put my letter away and then ran back outside to my older sister to give her the letter. The next morning, Daisy was gone and there was an opened letter envelpoe in the trash can.
FLASHBACK END

         Earlier today, my 15th birthday, I had opened my letter and found an invitation to Demon Pines Highschool.
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Lucky_Queen
I am so sorry.

I only read your stories recently.

I know how frustrating it is to never have comments or inspiration or people that are real supporters.

Sooo

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on March 16
silvermoon43344
cool she is continuing
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on December 14, 2015
AnimeCae28
Why U ABANDON ?? It's really INTERESTING !
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AnimeCae28
yeah but just because people aren't commenting doesn't mean they don't like it !! You have a GIFT !! An amazing, super, mega, awesome, gift ! so use it !! Srsly your stories are AMAZBALLS (don't ask what that word means, it's just a thing I say lolz)
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TsumikiMiniwa
Even if that is true, I literally cannot write unless I get comments on my story. Sorry.
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on December 10, 2015
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on December 10, 2015
TsumikiMiniwa
I abandoned it because nobody was commenting on my stories and I can't function without comments. Add that to nobody reading my newest book.....well, you see why this happened....
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on December 10, 2015
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on December 10, 2015
AdorableNatsuDragion
I really like the story so far!
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on December 10, 2015
TsumikiMiniwa
What did you think? Please comment so I know whether to continue or not...😔
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on August 30, 2015