A Fox Tale

A Fox Tale

Using my drawings as a guide, I create a story based around drawings I have made in the past, and future. This will be the first time I write a story from the perspective from an animal, in this case a fox, so criticize as much as you want!

published on March 1951 reads 11 readers 24 not completed
Chapter 1.
A New Life, a Lonely One

A New Life, a Lonely One

     The sky is grey, large clouds swell blocking out the sunlight, and rain starts to fall upon a loose, lush deciduous forest. Silently, a Red Fox sits alone next to a calm stream looking at his own reflection. The sky darkens to a more dark grey, and rain starts to fall gently out of the cool sky. The loose deciduous forest lies in silence, and the wind is still. As the rain gets harder, the stream picks up speed, and the reflection is distorted. Fern gives a subtle sigh as the reflection fades away, and a heavy rain drop hits his head. Thinking to himself:
"Why was I given this life if I were meant to be alone..I see the birds, the frogs, even the fish at least have some company.. To add..my former home is now occupied by a Night Owl, and I'm too big for it now..Homeless and alone..Where'd the family go? My Sister..my Brother, even my Mother and Father.. They all left one day, and never returned.." His thoughts grow silent for a moment before coming back. "I wonder what lies ahead for me.."
Lifting his head, Fern looks towards a familiar landmark, lookout point, a steep, sharp cliff face that was once occupied by a wolf pack.
"Maybe..I need a new home, and maybe I can see where that would be up there.." He thinks as he gets up, and slowly walks down the stream. Walking through the rain, the forest is silent, nothing moves, just water. The fish that are normally in the streams seem to be somewhere else, leaving an empty, rushing current. The walk is slow, and Fern thinks again about his options. He repeats them in his head like a broken record player over and over again. The rain does not stop, even at the foot of a the mountain.
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PagIsAwesome
Awesome drawings! BTW!
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tylnapp
Thank you, though they are not the best...
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Rebel_Assasin
"Pew, pew. I'm testing something"
Wow XD
Great story, btw!
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tylnapp
Thank you...that was a place holder....
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Omg I write stories from pics too!! This amazing it should be selling in shops! And I'm not lying
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tylnapp
Thank you...that...makes me want to write more to the story again..
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Glad to its amazing!
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
This is really great so far!
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Welcome! Always glad to help >-<
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tylnapp
You were right, the food did help me out. Thanks for telling me to eat something!
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tylnapp
*Is back from eating some waffles*
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
x3 Get some breakfeast, and then continue. *noms on pringles*
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tylnapp
I didn't eat breakfast yet, since I just woke up and hopped straight on the computer...after getting my soft robe.
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I'm not sure: you might bw a bit to tired, or to hungry,
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tylnapp
These are going to be extremely short chapters....but there's quite a few of them.... I'm trying my best to squeeze as much detail as possible out of each image....but it appears I'm failing....
I could be writing this better, I know I can...but why am I not..?
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Good luck.
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tylnapp
Thank you.
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tylnapp
Alright.
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I think you should try and merge version one and two together.
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tylnapp
Which version was better though?

I was contemplating on which version I should just stick to, and erasing the other...
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
No proplem! :3
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tylnapp
Thanks.
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