Cant Escape

This is a Story that will have you looking around you in fright.(Highly recommended to read in the dark). Btw the hotel in this story is a real haunted hotel in L.A I don't know how many floors their are or if their is one haunted room sorry if im wrong.

published on July 16, 201522 reads 9 readers 12 not completed
Chapter 1.

Cant Sleep

Me, Gracie, Hailey, Rylee, Hanna, and Isaiah. Finally graduated high school, we all decided to go to L.A. I picked the hotel as always.We all drove to the airport. We flew From West Virginia to California. We finally arrived and headed to the hotel we polled up and parked it was named Millennium Biltmore Hotel.
We walked up to the front desk a lady named Ericka said "Hello how may I help you" I replied "We are checking in for a room booked for 6 booked by Shayla" she said" Yes here are your 6 lock keys, You are in room 506"

We walked up to the 5th floor Isaiah said "She was acting creepy", "I know" Rylee replied. "I heard they have a great pool, lets head down there to get are minds to stop thinking about that creepy chick" Gracie said everyone replied "Yeah lets go". We where down at the pool no one was their besides us but the hotel was busy with people filling the halls. "Lets have some fun" Hanna said, We all started swimming. The pool was closed and we had to leave we went to are room it was 10:00pm we thought we should get some sleep, are suit had 2 rooms girls slept in the main room with every room put together with are own bath Isaiah had his own room because he won bet we made we thought we would win he also had his own bath.

At 1:00am he ran into are side and started screaming "Isaiah what the heck you just probably broke the glass windows why are you screaming" I yelled at him with everyone awake." My bathroom I got up to use it and the light was on and I know none of you used it" He said almost crying in fear "Isaiah we know your a drama queen you probably left it on" Hailey said. Rylee said" If your so scared sleep on the couch we will call the front desk in the morning" Isaiah replied "ok"
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kindperson
BTW where is can't escape 2
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redneckgirl_go_crazy
I haven't made it yet with my busy stuff
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on October 09, 2015
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on July 17, 2015
kindperson
I it
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on July 17, 2015
redneckgirl_go_crazy
f u im blocking you
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on July 16, 2015
redneckgirl_go_crazy
f u read my age 11
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Butt_Stallion
Age doesn't matter when someone writes a story
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on July 16, 2015
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on July 16, 2015
redneckgirl_go_crazy
im 11 and I wrought this
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Butt_Stallion
I just believe that if you want to be a good author then those tips will help, and I'm sorry if this comes out as offensive or rude.
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on July 16, 2015
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on July 16, 2015
redneckgirl_go_crazy
And I don't need your pointers
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on July 16, 2015
redneckgirl_go_crazy
first off I did full spell check on everything and there is going to be 4 more of these
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on July 16, 2015
Butt_Stallion
It's okay, just need spelling check and put the story into more paragraphs. Each time a person talks, it should start a new paragraph.
But hey, it's your story, it's how you want it. I thought you'd like some pointers
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Butt_Stallion
And as in spell check, I mean the different uses of words like you used "where" instead of "we're"
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