my songs (3)

Here you can see my songs. Btw do not steal my songs! Hope you enjoy! =^-^=

published on April 28, 20159 reads 6 readers 6 not completed
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Chapter 2.

chaos and roses

Elixir of life, feeds the life,
shedding it, there is no strife

Roses are always roses,
in that, not even chaos looses

Crimson is soul of the roses,
no matter what the chaos chooses

Roses, as fragile as they are,
only their lovers, that fragility scare

That razor, deeper in your wrist sink,
in roses, more your soul it link

Do not fear, thorns will not spear,
just be here, feel yourself dear

I see distortion, demons are here,
I hunt them, I trap them in sphere

Still, chaos is our mother,
and chaos is our father

I look and see, love is there,
do you dare to interfere
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
Oh, my god... that just gave me the chills, it was so good! I love the last one! Keep it up! It's so awesome! Submit into a magazine, it's so good!
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gothicskittlescupcake
Thanks!
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
You inspired me to write my own poem :D
Here's the link to it: http://www.qfeast.com/story/AcgU13/Colors-1
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
No problem :) :D
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