Falling For You

Falling For You

I shot up, realising I was in a metallic room. It was cold and I felt goosebump's appear on my arms, they were white as snow. It was a sickly white and as I tried to stand up, handcuffs were grabbing at my arms then I saw it, my arms were slit all over.

published on June 29, 201425 reads 13 readers 8 not completed
Chapter 1.
It Was More Fun In hell

It Was More Fun In hell

I drooped my hair and face upside down, checking if any creatures were lurking underneath before swinging my legs around the bed and suddenly feel a hostile tug at my right wrist. I, sharply twisted my head around to see a handcuff reaching at the bottom of my forearm. I suddenly felt curious of how I never felt this crisp coldness. But then in astonishment and shock I saw cuts and wounds working their way up my arm.
I scream. But not in pain, in disturbance of someone, or something, could do this and leave yet no pain whatsoever. I look up, wincing and I then notice markings working their way across the wall
they spelt 'It Was More Fun In hell'. I cried in fear, screaming as loud as I possibly could. Then spiders, many spiders, made their way under the walls. This was a game, a game to test human sanity.
I thrust and yanked until the cuffs let loose and I slid my slim hands out, grabbing a 1980's magazine and began to swat these spiders with a red marking on their lower body, black widows.
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SUGAR0BABY
Please finish it and add something where she fights her shadows or something like she has to use refraction of light to get rid of them!
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on April 16
TheSmolKookieMonster
Wow this seems interesting
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Coolcass22
Thanks! I try haha
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on July 02, 2014
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on July 01, 2014
Coolcass22
Thankyou x
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on July 01, 2014
TossedWhisper4
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on June 30, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I can't wait for more, it seems very interesting.
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on June 29, 2014
Coolcass22
Oh you will soon lol, if u read the stat update when I finished the story u might get it x
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on June 29, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Awesome! Though I don't understand it yet. Keep on writing!!!!!!!
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on June 29, 2014