Blood of Dragons

Blood of Dragons

Abandoned at the doors of the Arcane tower, a little babe cries, eyes of brass and hair of gold, a half breed, between elf and man... And the blood of ancient fire running through his veins. The fate of the land rests on him, but where he leads it, no-one knows...

published on February 19, 2016109 reads 15 readers 70 not completed
Chapter 1.

Abandonment

Night creeps on Solaris, Capital city of the skull lands. Smoke drifts from the torches outside and a warm wind runs swiftly through the city. In the shadows, a singular pillar of ash drifts from place to place, not at all in random... but intelligently... It avoids sight from the passing guard, slipping through cracks in the doors and windows. Soon, it makes it's way to the largest construct in the city... The Arcane tower, the place where wizards and sorcerers are trained to use, or in a sorcerers case, harness the power of magic.
The Ash cloud stopped at it's huge doors, and slowly solidifies. first to become visible are fingers and feet, then arms and legs, all going from ash to flesh, then on top of flesh, clothing. A small pile of ash still remains to the side, still and calm. The being looks at it, face stricken with worry. "Come on... come on... please don't fail me..." Then the ashes move, forming into a small basket, blanket.. and little boy, with big brass eyes staring at his father. The man smiles, and picks up the baby. "Hello, my little dragon." The baby squeals in delight, laughing and smiling. The man gives a sad smile, and puts the baby back in the basket. "Be safe my boy" He places a note in the basket with the boy, then dissolves into ash once more. Leaving the boy, with a paper. Only one word on it. Rathashan.
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Winter_of_the_Wolves
Wow you updated it a lot.
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Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Yep, and there is still more to come!
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on August 02, 2016
WolfShadows
cool story
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Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Thank you, not done yet though...
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WolfShadows
Okay @Do_Not_Fear_The_Reaper
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on July 05, 2016
WolfShadows
well
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on July 05, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Hi
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Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Hi
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Winter_of_the_Wolves
Here we go
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on March 22, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Here we go
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on March 22, 2016
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on March 22, 2016
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on March 22, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
What's a something?
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on March 22, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Something we have
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on March 22, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
What is a friend?
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on March 22, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
A friend
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on March 22, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Who is tylnapp?
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on March 22, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
tylnapp's stories, giving help
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on March 22, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Reading what?
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on March 22, 2016
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on March 22, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
What are you doing?
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on March 22, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Hello?

Welcome to my humble post that says 'Hello? Welcome to my humble post that says 'Hello? Welcome to my humble post that says 'Hello? Welcome to my humble post that says 'Hello? Welcome to my humble post that says...'

I give up. -_-
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Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Hi?
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
No-one does, chill
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
I don't remember everything.
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Never heard of the saying "Curiosity killed the cat, satisfaction brought it back?"
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Cat thing??? What cat thing?
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Sorry, warped the curiosity killed the cat thing. Just bored. In need of a decent rp
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on March 21, 2016
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Because curiosity found the reaper, and the reaper cannot be killed
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Cause I wanna know more about you are interesting and not very boring like others. I'm not saying you're not boring because you CAN be. Why did you ask?
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Why do you consistently follow and find me? Is there a motive? And since you are 13 you can use the PM function, why not do so?
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on March 21, 2016
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Yeah.

Question
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on March 21, 2016
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Almost 6 foot
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
-_- How tall are you?
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Taller than you most likely, and medium sized words
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Ugh. Tiny wittle man, big words.
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
No, curious with the reason behind the repetition
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Ok. Annoyed?
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on March 21, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
No, not scared.
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
You sound scared of my post that says 'Hello? Welcome to my humble posy that says 'Hello? Welcome to my humble post that says 'Hello? Welcome to my humble post that says...'
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on March 21, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
?
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Vaykalin_Bloodbane
What?
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on March 17, 2016
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on March 17, 2016
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Answer me
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on March 17, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm?
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on March 17, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
What're you doing?
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on March 17, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
OH COME ON HURRY UP IM SO BORED MUST TALK TO SOME1
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on March 13, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
ANSWER ME!
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on March 13, 2016
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Hi? Hi? Hi? Hi? Hi? hi? Hi? hi? Hi? Hi? Hi?
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on March 12, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
XxMeow?xX
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on March 12, 2016
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Hi?
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Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Morning goldie
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Winter_of_the_Wolves
*Sigh* Fine.
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on March 08, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Nope,and please don't
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on March 08, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
This one. I guess I didn't totally cover it.
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on March 08, 2016
Vaykalin_Bloodbane
This one or another one?
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on March 08, 2016
Winter_of_the_Wolves
Heh heh, I posted all over your story.
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on February 22, 2016
vive_la_revolution
Whoooaaaaa

This is so cool!
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on February 19, 2016
vive_la_revolution
YUSSS

I NEED MORE

I also need to write a critique that totally kills your lack of perfect grammar. Give me two hours to write one that actually reaches my insane, perfectionist expectations.
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Vaykalin_Bloodbane
Whats wrong with my grammar? What did I miss?
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vive_la_revolution
Your grammar is actually really good, but (as mentioned before) I am a perfectionist and think that this story should be totally perfect. So.
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