Songs I Make

if you know me you know i like making songs stories poems, etc. heres some of the songs i made and reminer : never said they were good. also theres instructions on how to read it by the title.

published on April 10, 201962 reads 22 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Face Down ( verse 1, chorus, verse 2, chorus , chorus)

Verse 1
im trying to take deep breaths
swim my way to the top
but its impossible if you keep pushing me down
im trying to keep going
maybe i can climb through the obstacle
but it wont work if you keep calling foul
trya fly to the stars
tryna chase after my dreams
but it will fail if you put lower my ladder if self esteem tryna make you happy
tryna make you proud
but it wont work for later on gotta fly now.

Chorus
but you
keep pushing me diwn
you keep
tripping me up
and im falling
face down
face down
and you
keep yelling at me
why cant
you let me be
and im falling
face down
face down
   
Verse 2
im tryning to be a succeeder
a really high achiever
but it seems your no believer
gotta feeling you want me down
so you can talk  when im not around
but you dont care do you now?
ll just keep falling face down.
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FuckYou
Good job me
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on August 14, 2019
caspertheminorman
I may make a few changes, but could I see if I could actually make one of them a (crappy) guitar + singing cover?
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DemonQueen
id be honored. @mildly.annoyedpringle
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on May 24, 2019
DemonQueen
of course! @mildly.annoyedpringle
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caspertheminorman
alright!
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on May 22, 2019
Queenofshadows
WOAH!! :3 NICE!!
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DemonQueen
tanks
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DemonQueen
:D
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on April 10, 2019
Queenofshadows
Ya Welcome
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