Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 201679 reads 20 readers 19 completed
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Chapter 8.
Goodbye

Goodbye

I dashed trough all the bios, the energy I was feeling was some sort of ancient rage I didn't know to have, but that was just what I needed to defeat my "clones". I simply slayed and killed every single bios was remaining.I was here, I was there, it seemed to be like a teleport in an explosion of Dark-red energy every time i moved. That was just amazing. I can tell this only thanks to the others that saw that, because I wasn't really myself. The rage I was feeling...wasn't really mine...It was very very older than me. (to be honest, there wasn't much to do to be older than me, I mean, I had only some days of life at the time...)
"REDIK , STOP! DON'T KILL HIM!"
I heard Sonic's voice and...I woke up from this sort of rage trance. Eggman was lying to the ground, I had my hand on his throat...Claws?
"Why have I claws? Was I about to kill him slaying his throat?" I backed off, horrified ,and then...
Eggman:- Delta bios...help me...
Another me appeared in a flash of light-blue energy.It wasn't like the others...he was grey yes, but the black details of his body was cyan instead.
He stared at me for a moment, then he took Eggman and like he appeared, he was gone.
I run into the others "Guys! Are you ok?"
I received some little confused answers: Yes,we are. Ouch! Hey Tails you need a hand? No, I can do it. That guys were strong...  something like that.
"I'm sorry guys...because of me you have been hurt...it's all my fault"
All of them laughed, like I have just told a funny joke.
"W-what are laughing at?!"
Knuckles gave me a friendly punch on the arm "You don't have to worry or apologize.We're tough."
"Redik, did you notice your fur? It turned red."Silver told.
What? "And your eyes have changed" made me notice Tails.
WHAT?! Then Manic spoke "Oh, and you have wings and scales"
"WHAT THE HELL?!" "Just kidding XD"
"MANIC! I KILL YOU!" I started to run after Manic in a general laugh, but after a few seconds I was very tired.
"Hey buddy, what's wrong?"
"I'm just...a little tired"
"Hey you're returning normal."
After a few minutes, and Tails's tests, the guys explained me what happened while I was in trance.After that we cleaned the place, and then everyone returned to his home.
Sonic came close to me"Hey Redik, if you want you can stay here."
"No, thanks Sonic,but I prefer to leave you alone.All of you."
"What do you mean?"
"I'll fight Eggman alone.I don't want you guys to get hurt again."
"Uff...There's no chance to change your mind huh?"
"Nope"   He shook my hand and hugged me.
"Good luck then...be careful."
"Thanks. You too."
I ran as fast as I could away from the only family I probably will meet in my life.But that was my choice.
I was the start of this and I will end this,no matter the costs.
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Sevas_Ren
Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More▼
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Weiss_Schnee
Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Weiss_Schnee
Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
Sevas_Ren
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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Weiss_Schnee
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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Sevas_Ren
I don't see why not.
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on January 07, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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Sevas_Ren
This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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Weiss_Schnee
*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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Sevas_Ren
I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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Sevas_Ren
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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milfs
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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