Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 201679 reads 20 readers 19 completed
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Chapter 5.
The real me: Redik

The real me: Redik

"WHAT HAVE YOU INJECTED?!TELL ME! RRGH!"
Tails:- don't worry, stay calm.
Silver:- What have you done?
Tails:- You'll see soon.
Again, like that time Eggman injected that burning energy into me, I felt burning, melting.
But this was different...somehow I was feeling better, my head wasn't hurting anymore.
I felt asleep again, but this time I was dreaming...dreaming about the guys...Sonic,Tails,
Knuckles, Shadow,Amy...everyone. They were calling me "...Redik...who is this? Is that my name? I like it..." I was happy...for the first time in this short life of mine, I was happy.

Other's POV
Sonic:- So, what have you done?
Tails:- I isolated all the different DNAs , in order to create a true DNA for him instead of that mess he had.
Knuckles:- Why did you do that?
Silver:- Yeah, he could be one of the bad guys.
Tails:- I noticed he looks really a lot like Sonic,and I found out why.He has a great amount of Sonic's DNA, so he can't be a bad guy.
Shadow:- The DNA doesn't make the personality.
Tails:- And that's why I took his mental track.
All:- His what?
Tails went to take a strange graphic.
Knuckles:- That's the mental thing?
Tails:- Yep.As you see, in this point (point somewhere in the graphic) he is quite unstable,swinging trough the insanity and the uncontrolled anger,
but in this other point (point another place on the graphic) he is calm,kind,nice...
Sonic:- And...so? You mean he's not bad?
"Exactly"Said Tails with a smile.

I don't know for how much time I slept...it could be nothing or it could be ages...
"Are you happy?"
"What...Yes...but who?"
A blue cat with two white angel-like wings was in front of me.
"Hi!"
"Who are you?"
"I'm Happy"
"Happy?"
"Aye sir!"
"........I need to wake up"
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Sevas_Ren
Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More▼
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Weiss_Schnee
Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Weiss_Schnee
Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
Sevas_Ren
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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Weiss_Schnee
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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Sevas_Ren
I don't see why not.
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Weiss_Schnee
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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Sevas_Ren
This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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Weiss_Schnee
*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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Sevas_Ren
I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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Sevas_Ren
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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milfs
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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