Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 201679 reads 20 readers 19 completed
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Chapter 11.
Chrono

Chrono

"Is a long time no see, Huh?"
"You...are..."
"Delta-Bios? Yep that's me.But if I prefer to be called with another name..."
"...you have changed..."
"Well, when you discover that your big bro is the villain...you stop to want to be like him, so yes, I have changed."
"What...are you talking about..."
"You betrayed us Big-bro!I was thinking that you could be one of us again, If you knew me...but I was wrong!"
"What's wrong with you? What are you talking about?EGGMAN! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM!"
Eggman:- How can you be so heartless... you betrayed your own family...OHOHOHOH!
Now I get it, Eggman must've implanted wrong memories in Delta's mind!
Eggman:- Delta Bios, kill him!
"Hey old man, I told you already... my name..." He disappeared, and in just a fraction of a second I flew against the wall...sent by a kick.
"...is Chrono"
How can he be so fast? Why didn't I see that coming? Wait, Chrono?
Another kick...my head was entirely in the wall now... I came out of the wall
"Hey bro...wanna know why I call myself Chrono?"
"Eh, maybe because-Ugh!"
His knee was in my stomach,pressing.Damn...If only I could be in the full of force...
"Ahahah...it seems you were figuring it out, too bad that I have kicked you..."
"...Cough...don't get so cocky...I'm still alive..."
"Yes, I can see that. ...hehe...heheheh..."
"What's so funny?"
"Ehehehehahahah...the funny thing...is that you sent your friends back to Mobius, but I changed the auto-pilot settings, so they're about to SMASH on  Mobius, Ahahahahah!"
What?!
"Eeeeh...now, die. FATE...CAPRICCIO!" A light blue ray thundered towards me, and I wasn't able to dodge it.
Every fiber of my body then started to hurt,like it was in the middle of a disintegration. I could feel them...erasing from time...
My...friends...my...family...I...will...
"I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOUUU!"
That feeling, was the same of the last time, that rage...I was now full of energy, and ready to fight! I got rid of that ray, and dashed at him, hitting him and throwing him several meters away.
He laughed "Ahahah, so someone is ready to fight huh? Well..." A sort of clock appeared in his left eye "Hey doc, put on the song "Hey kids!", I need a good soundtrack for this." The song started to go out from the speakers. "Better...So big brother..."
LET'S ROCK!
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Sevas_Ren
Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More▼
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Weiss_Schnee
Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Weiss_Schnee
Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
Sevas_Ren
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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Weiss_Schnee
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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Sevas_Ren
I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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Sevas_Ren
This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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Weiss_Schnee
*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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Sevas_Ren
I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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Sevas_Ren
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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on January 04, 2016
milfs
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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on January 04, 2016