Genie Magic

One lonely hedgehog, desperate to see the outside world, to meet new friends. But she was locked away for a reason - she isn't normal.

published on June 02, 2014122 reads 18 readers 24 not completed
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Genie Magic
Chapter 5.

"I wish..." Uh oh!

Sapphire
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We're all round at Jackie's house for tonight. The beds are set up, midnight snacks all over the big bedroom, but for now we're dancing in the living room to some of the greatest tunes of today. We've invited some other of our friends round too. Kameo, Rose, and Luna. Tonight is gonna total RULE!
Jackie pats my shoulder and points over to Katia.
She's dancing!
"And you said you didn't know any moves," Alexis tells Katia. "You rule, girl!"
"Why thank you, but I'm not really royalty," Katia replies.
Something tells me she knows nothing about teenage life. And I don't blame her, being locked away for the time she has been.
"Katia," I start. "You've got to get more confidence in yourself."
"I just feel... so... out of place," Katia says. "You ladies - guys, I mean - you're so hop. I mean, hip. I don't know anything about fashion, music, boys, or-"
"Who cares?" Jackie says. "You got your own style."
"There's nothing more fashionable than doing your own thing, Katia," Luna says.
"You just gotta get it on, girl," Kameo then adds.
"Oh surely, you go too far. I mean, I'll get on it," Katia replies. She sort of hesitates in the middle.
Then, the lights suddenly pop. Jackie tries to switch on the light again. Nothing.
"What the hell?"
"Oh God, they're here!" Katia shouts.
We then hear the door open, and grab for the closest weapons, sneaking down to the hallway.
Katia then walks behind us with something in her hand. "I found this pistol," she says.
A pistol?
Since when did those goons after Katia carry pistols? I didn't see them with any pistols.
The intruders then sneak into the living room. When we're close to the sofa, we see two figures jump out from behind, and shout, "PARTY RAID!"
Leat feels around for a switch, and this time, the lights switch back on.
And we see the intruders.
Jackie totally loses her temper. "SONIC! KAZAN! WHAT THE HELL?! YOU SCARED ME TO DEATH!" She pushes Sonic and Kazan onto the sofa, and stamps her foot, still angry of course.
"Jackie, calm down," Luna says, placing her hand on Jackie's right shoulder.
But Jackie ignores Luna, still facing the boys. "I WISH YOU WOULD TOTALLY CROAK!"
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Comments (24)

Noescaping
I wish you hadn't ended this story, it was a really cool idea I would've loved to see it continue
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on April 21, 2017
Noescaping
I'm the best DJ on Mobius. XD. Dj I stole your job. XD
Dj: :(
Alexis: Sorry dude.
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on June 10, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
XD SHELTER!
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sapphirethehedgehog
@.@
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Weiss_Schnee
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on September 27, 2014
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on September 27, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
DJ!
NIALL!
A!
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on September 27, 2014
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on June 09, 2014
Cristallite
Cool
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on June 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can u in include my OC Dawn too?
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on June 09, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
You have a Sonic OC? Cool! Post on my wall what she's like!
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on June 06, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
oOo suspence!
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on June 06, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Simple. Just hover your mouse over create on the top bar, and select story. You then type in what you want your story to be called, and a brief description to the story intro, maybe a pic as well, it's strongly recommended. Then click Save and next, and get working on the chapters! :)
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on June 04, 2014
Pepper_the_wolf
hola im new you coud tell me how to make storys and could you add my oc pepper shes a blue wolf with blue wings it's okay if you can't add her that's why my user is pepper the wolf:-c
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on June 04, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Yay! Girls night at Jackies!!
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on June 04, 2014
Cristallite
Cool
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on June 04, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Cool, write more! You're a really talented writer.
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on June 03, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
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on June 03, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome
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on June 03, 2014
Cristallite
Nice
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on June 03, 2014
Noescaping
Cool.
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on June 03, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
I'll see if I can.
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on June 02, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Leat X Niall!
I SHIP THAT!!!
XD
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on June 02, 2014
Frostgoddess
Awesome!
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on June 02, 2014
Frostgoddess
Coolio!
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on June 02, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Cool so far! Can I have an OC named Dawn?
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on June 02, 2014