If we met- Qfeast Club

Well, here we go. Basically, this came with an idea. "What if we met? You know, qfeasters. And we were all in the same school. That would be cool." So, here we go.

published on September 21, 2016222 reads 41 readers 61 not completed
Chapter 1.

An authors note

So! Before we begin...

-If you want to be in, comment or pm me, and I'll pm you how.

-This takes place somewhere in Texas.

-If I'm not accurate with the personality, tell me! I'll be happy to make it more accurate! If you in the story would have done different, then tell me how they'd react. Tell me so I don't end up making something not even close to real life.

-If you want to make a version in your characters POV, go ahead. You don't even need to give me credit.

-Any problems in general tell me.

-Oh yeah, and requests for the story.

So, other than that, enjoy?
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Star_Butterfly_And_Smokey_Quartz
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on October 18, 2016
Soulfure
I really want to punch that bitch in the face.
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on October 16, 2016
WolfbourneTheFirst
I love how you made Soulfure's character the exact same as he is in real life!
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on October 04, 2016
tylnapp
After reading the eighth chapter...I am sorry you had to deal with those two things like that...and the story you wrote brought many factors to the table...some unseen while others intentional...It brought respect, and a way for your friend (lest it be for a day or so) live enternally within your story, it also brought us attention to an important event...and See More▼
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Thanks. He'd apriciate that
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tylnapp
No problem, I am glad that I could be of use.
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on September 26, 2016
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on September 26, 2016
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on September 26, 2016
Northern_Narnia
Hory barrs some kid died at my school too, it's really sad cause I didn't know him, but the moment the principle said "He passes" EVERYONE, even the teachers, started sobbing
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Yeah.
That was the situation here.
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on September 23, 2016
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on September 23, 2016
AvengersPuddinAndTwinsie
The girl bully remindse of what happens to me irl
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Tbh, I based her off a girl I met
This one is actually slightly nicer ;3
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AvengersPuddinAndTwinsie
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on September 23, 2016
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on September 23, 2016
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on September 23, 2016
tylnapp
Is there anyway I could join in on this story..?
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Yep! Let me pm you the link.
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on September 22, 2016
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on September 22, 2016
FallingRozePetals
BOI if u live in texas we can have a 50% chance of meeting (Houston we have a problem)
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AvengersPuddinAndTwinsie
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on September 23, 2016
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
OH cool!
Exept I live in the northern half Dx
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on September 22, 2016
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on September 22, 2016
Sheepshagger_Iceland
:O moreeeee
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on September 22, 2016
Northern_Narnia
You nailed me so well I actually snorted
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
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on September 22, 2016
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
When my character said, "We should be a communist!" I was like YUS
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
It sounds like something you'd say, anyway.
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
(Thanks Internet)
I'm honestly not sure.
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
fas·cism
ˈfaSHˌizəm/Submit
noun
an authoritarian and nationalistic right-wing system of government and social organization. (Thank you, internet)
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on September 22, 2016
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Ah. I'm honestly not sure.
The consept of communism is great- Exept people need to work to live. And dictatorship is kind of corrupted to the high use of propaganda, witch can and usually does lead to rebelling in systems.
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
It is almost like a dictatorship
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on September 22, 2016
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
... I'm still confused.
We don't study type of governments much....
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
It's kind of like the Nazis
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on September 22, 2016
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
I always have a war between me and @WolfbournTheFirst on what our group should be. A communism (mine) or a fascism (Brody).
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on September 22, 2016
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on September 22, 2016
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
I HAD TO GO THERE XD
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on September 22, 2016
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
Hey, I just read chapter two and you got me pretty accurate. One problem though. I believe you accidentally put in that I have brown hair with a yellow tinge when you meant my skin. Other than that, imma keep reading because this is pretty good.
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Oh, sorry. I'll fix that tomorrow.
I'm kinda trying to draw something for my GT class and it's a pain in the ass ^_^U
(Maybe today idk)
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Oh. Seriously?
We actually do it differently.
Because my GT class is my English, we do something similar but with books and music.
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
Instead of actually doing work, we just sit around and talk about things like politics, philosophical questions, ext. Last year, we got to go on a field trip to one of the malls in OKC and I bought a few mangas in Barns & Noble. @WolfbourneTheFirst was there with me, too.
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on September 22, 2016
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Yep. Doing a book project yet?
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on September 22, 2016
Soulfure
Ok! And you have GT too!? IM IN GT like as in Gifted and Talented
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on September 22, 2016
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on September 22, 2016
rhinestone.skies
WHOO, I live in TX :^)
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Oh cool =O so do I.
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rhinestone.skies
Oh really? Nice :>
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on September 22, 2016
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on September 21, 2016
McDermottsAngel
My character is actually really accurate. And I love this story! 😊
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Thanks! I was afraid it wouldn't be, tbh..
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McDermottsAngel
No problem! And no, it's a lot like me. ☺
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on September 21, 2016
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on September 21, 2016
Lady_Artemis
Takes place in Texas?
Shit, I'm in the UK...
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
You don't actually have to live in Texas.
The reason why I said it takes place in Texas is it may explain some things later on.
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on September 21, 2016
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on September 21, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
aHHHHHHH This is awesome!!!! XD
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on September 21, 2016
Hogwarts_Huntress
This is pretty epic. I wanna be in it :3
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on September 21, 2016
Sheepshagger_Iceland
Ayyyyy when your done with your break meet meeee
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Sheepshagger_Iceland
But I can't PM so oops
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Sheepshagger_Iceland
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on September 21, 2016
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on September 21, 2016
Vilight_the_storm_wolfgirl
I wanna be in it. It sound cool!
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on September 21, 2016
PoisonousSugar
Omg
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
.. Is something innacurate?
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PoisonousSugar
No but I keep laughing at the dodge ball part lol
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on September 21, 2016
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on September 21, 2016
PoisonousSugar
Nice!
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on September 21, 2016
twentyonecrybabies
this is rly cool!
could i be in it by any chance?
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on September 21, 2016
AvengersPuddinAndTwinsie
Can I be in here
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Sure lemme send you the link
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AvengersPuddinAndTwinsie
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on September 21, 2016
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on September 21, 2016
Lady_Artemis
XD this is awesome!!!
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on September 21, 2016
ACupOfTaeTwoSugaCubesAndAKookie
XD I love this idea!! ^^
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on September 21, 2016