Just One Mistake

Just One Mistake

What if one mistake made you lose what you rely on most: your hearing? What if that mistake made you start fresh in a whole other state, with a new name and new look, at a whole new school? What if the relaxing voice of your mother was replaced by a constant ringing? What if one mistake broke your leg, took away your hearing, killed a friend, and injured two other friends? What if your strawberry blonde hair was turned black, your birth name changed to Edwin?

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Chapter 5.

Four - Celebrity

"We'll live like spoiled royalty"

Chapter Four - Celebrity

*David POV*

"Come on, she's a deaf teenage girl on crutches; what harm could she possibly do?" I yelled at the dean of students, my face red with anger.

"I'm sorry David, I can't allow you to bunk with a girl, much less a high schooler." How could he be so calm? I'm yelling at him, and he's calm as heck.

"She's my sister! What do you expect me to do to her?"

"You know the rules, David,"

"Fine," time for a new approach, "Have you ever heard of a band called Supernova?"

He tensed, raising an eyebrow in question. "Yes?"

I walked outside, motioning for Nova to follow me. She sighed, not moving a muscle. I walked over, handing her her crutches and helping her up. When I walked back inside of the office with my injured sister, I saw a confused look begin to form on Patrick's face.

"This, Patrick, is my sister, Nova." I smiled, and Nova only stared at the tile floor, "Now, Patrick, tell me this: what could an injured celebrity possibly do that's so bad in your eyes?"

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*Edwin POV*

I slowly opened the door of the main dorm building, entering the large room crowded with people. As I stumbled my way towards the elevator, I felt a hand be planted on my shoulder. I turned around to see my brother, David, smiling at me. He held up a soccer ball, signing "Wanna play?" I let out a groan, pointing towards the cast on my left leg. "Okay, wanna watch us, then?"

I really just wanted to say no, go up to his dorm, and lay down, but something inside of me was screaming at me to just say yes. I nodded my head, following my smiling brother back out of the large building. Watching some guys play soccer couldn't be too bad, now could it?

Turns out I was completely wrong. Everyone, and I mean EVERYONE, wanted me to at least try and play soccer with them. Could they not see the bored look on my face and the big, white cast on my leg? I mean, seriously, who asks a girl on crutches if she would play soccer with them? College students, apparently.

It just got worse when I saw that all too familiar face appear on the field. It was the guy from the lunch table. I saw him and another guy run up to David with smiles on their faces, embracing each other in a "bro hug," as my brother calls it. I slowly made my way over to David, tapping his shoulder. "Remember, I'm Edwin, not Nova." I signed to him once he turned back to me.

"Come on, why do I have to call you Edwin?" I could practically feel the whiny tone he was using.

"David, I don't want them to know." I warily signed, "Especially not the younger one. He goes to my school, David!"

"Oh, so you have met someone." I saw a smile begin to form on David's face as he turned back to the two guys in front of us. The confused look on both of their faces was priceless.
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milfs
ADDDDD
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on December 18, 2016
milfs
O.O
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TurtleLover96
Sorry I haven't been updating recently. I've been really busy studying for semester tests, and the internet at my house is out.
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TurtleLover96
@TwiliTwili Thanks!
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on May 19, 2016
milfs
I just really loved the 8th chapter!
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on May 18, 2016
dogboy
This is really great c:
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TurtleLover96
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
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on May 12, 2016
SlugcatSeagullAghase
(Really, really well written. It's amazing. I like the way it moves smoothly from the past to the present. You should publish this and become famous :P)
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TurtleLover96
Thanks! I'd have to do a lot of editing and lengthen the chapters quite a bit to be able to publish it, though.
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
THEFanclub
This story was on the What's Hot.
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TurtleLover96
It was? Man, that's awesome!
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milfs
I am obsessed with this story.
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RebeliousDoorknob
same
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TurtleLover96
I'm glad you like it.
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TurtleLover96
Thanks! It really means a lot to me!
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milfs
XD
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on May 09, 2016
TurtleLover96
@TwiliTwili Well, I'll try and get the next chapter done fast. You know, for your sake. XD
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on May 09, 2016
milfs
XD
Seriously, though, I'm on the edge of my seat.
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