Just One Mistake

Just One Mistake

What if one mistake made you lose what you rely on most: your hearing? What if that mistake made you start fresh in a whole other state, with a new name and new look, at a whole new school? What if the relaxing voice of your mother was replaced by a constant ringing? What if one mistake broke your leg, took away your hearing, killed a friend, and injured two other friends? What if your strawberry blonde hair was turned black, your birth name changed to Edwin?

published on May 05, 201685 reads 29 readers 18 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Two - Nightmares

"I never let people in, and I have you to remind me why"

Chapter Two - Nightmares

My heart quickened as I stared into his dark eyes. There was a look on his face that terrified me. He looked angry. Really angry. I don't think I've ever seen Asher mad, not even once in the eight years I'd known him. I winced as his lips moved harshly, meaning he'd probably yelled at me. A frown crossed my face as I tried to read his lips. He took a step towards me, signing one simple word: "Run." And, at that, I turned around and ran from my childhood friend.

-=+=-

I sat bolt upright in bed, almost banging heads with my worried brother. I looked at his scared face, confused as to why he was in my room in the middle of the night. He relaxed slightly and I raised an eyebrow in question.

"You were screaming," I frowned slightly as he continued to stare into my tired eyes. "You okay, sis?"

"Yeah," I forced a smile, just trying to get him to leave.

"You sure?"

"Yeah, I'm completely fine," my brother finally ruffled my hair and left the room.

I let out a silent sigh as I leaned back in bed, not wanting to sleep again. The nightmares were becoming more frequent and I didn't like it. I hated imagining Asher as a dangerous person.

-=+=-

I looked up at the large school building, putting all of my weight on my crutches. Sighing, I prepared myself for another day of silence. I had begun to get used to the silence, but it still infuriated me. I especially hated watching everyone else laugh and talk to each other while I had to just sit there in complete silence. Finally gaining my composure, I ambled my way through the large doors.

As I took my usual seat in the back of the room, the teacher placed the lesson on my desk like usual. I pulled my pencil out, prepping myself for the pointless English lesson for the day. I frowned, though, when I could almost feel someone set their stuff on the desk next to mine. No one ever sat next to me.

I looked over, seeing the guy from the lunch table smiling at me. He held up a notebook that had the neatly written words, "I came prepared this time."

I sighed as he held the notebook and a pink sharpie out to me. When I finally accepted the notebook, I simply wrote, "Why pink?"

He took the notebook back, confused for a moment, and then finally realized as he looked down at the pink sharpie he was holding. "I figured girls liked pink."

I was about to reply again when I remembered the shattered glass covering Asher's body, when I remembered looking down, seeing my own body covered in blood and glass. I simply looked down at the lesson before me, beginning to read.
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milfs
ADDDDD
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on December 18, 2016
milfs
O.O
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TurtleLover96
Sorry I haven't been updating recently. I've been really busy studying for semester tests, and the internet at my house is out.
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TurtleLover96
@TwiliTwili Thanks!
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on May 19, 2016
milfs
I just really loved the 8th chapter!
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on May 18, 2016
dogboy
This is really great c:
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TurtleLover96
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
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on May 12, 2016
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on May 12, 2016
SlugcatSeagullAghase
(Really, really well written. It's amazing. I like the way it moves smoothly from the past to the present. You should publish this and become famous :P)
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TurtleLover96
Thanks! I'd have to do a lot of editing and lengthen the chapters quite a bit to be able to publish it, though.
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
THEFanclub
This story was on the What's Hot.
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TurtleLover96
It was? Man, that's awesome!
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on May 10, 2016
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on May 10, 2016
milfs
I am obsessed with this story.
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RebeliousDoorknob
same
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TurtleLover96
I'm glad you like it.
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on May 11, 2016
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TurtleLover96
Thanks! It really means a lot to me!
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milfs
XD
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on May 09, 2016
TurtleLover96
@TwiliTwili Well, I'll try and get the next chapter done fast. You know, for your sake. XD
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on May 09, 2016
milfs
XD
Seriously, though, I'm on the edge of my seat.
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