mystery in Spooky Valley (mission: haunted house)

it all starts as a nice day but what happens if things are disappearing or worse. One of my old stories and was supposed to be a Horror story. [I'm sorry if this isn't a horror story] Also, it's not completed yet.

published on February 24, 20193 reads 3 readers 2 not completed

a start to a nightmare

[this is from Jaz point of view]
‘Hi there Violet, have you heard what has happened in Spooky valley?’ At that time Violet was listening to the BREAKING NEWS. They then show what I had seen (people were just disappearing without knowing where). Violet turned around and said ‘but how did they disappear?’ Just then Scarlet, Ivy and Cindy came in the door.
2 minutes later...

‘Ok, one at a time please’ Ivy started with saying that Scarlet, Cindy and her were watching one of their favourite shows, when it got irrupted by a news channel saying BREAKING NEWS.  Then the reporter said that in Spooky Valley, people are just magically disappearing without a trace. After that, Lola and Lucy came in to tell us, that more people are disappearing from Spooky Valley. 'Why is this happening today?' 'Maybe we should go and find out for ourselves what happened'   What was I thinking. Going to Spooky Valley. Where people are vanishing?! Maybe I should think before going to Spooky Valley. Like what if there are lots of creepy spiders. No way am I going to a place with them, spiders. If there are spiders or maybe there’s something even more creepy then spiders. I don't even want to think about it.
So why should we go to Spooky Valley. When we don't even know if this is real. Or just some weird dream or nightmare or maybe even a trick. Like there's got to be a reason. For people to just go without any one or thing knowing where they went too. It just doesn't sound right, that's all. As I was trying to think of a way of not going. A sudden bang at the door caught my attention. So, I decided to see who was at the door. I got to the door and looked through the peek hole. Through the peephole I saw a different world (lots of old trees with some leaves, black cats, no flowers, abandoned houses, mist or fog, big spiders and it seemed to be VERY, VERY dark). Hold on, Wait a minute, big spiders. I had to looked twice, before believing that this was a completely different world (And that there were lots of spiders). Like it looked like some type of horror theme world that felt really creepy.

Then I decided to go to the back door. To see if it was the same as the front. As I got to the back door and peep through the little hole in the door. Ivy came up to me (with a convened look on her face) and said ‘are you okay Jaz, you look like you have just seen one of your worst nightmares?’ ‘I’m f-f-fine, j-j-just looking through the p-p-peephole to s-s-see s-s-something, that’s a-a-all’ Ivy still wasn’t convinced that I was fine.' Are you sure that you’re ok Jaz? because you should really, see yourself in a mirror. Or something that you can see yourself in' ‘o-ok t-t-then?’ So, I then went to my room to find a mirror. When I found a mirror, I looked at it and saw something really strange. I saw what I saw though the peephole but this time, there were more things. I dropped the mirror on my bed and hid in a corner of my room. I then buried my face in my arms and started shaking.

‘I wonder if Jaz is alright?’ ‘Why do you say that Ivy?’ Cindy asked Ivy ‘Well, when I went to check on her, she was looking though the backdoor’s peephole. I asked if she was alright. But she didn’t look or even sound ok.’ ‘Where is Jaz now?’ ‘She’s in her room, I think. We should check on her’ So, Ivy and Cindy went into Jaz’s room and saw her in the corner with her face buried in her arms and shaking lots. ‘Jaz?’ no response. So, Cindy decided to gently tap Jaz on the shoulder to see if that would work. ‘Jaz? It’s Ivy and Cindy, are you alright?’ Jaz slowly turned her head and replied in a shaky voice ‘I-I-I’m n-not f-f-fine’ Ivy looked at Jaz and looked worried ‘Jaz? Why are you shaking lots? Was it to do with what you saw in the peephole?’ Jaz took a deep breath and slowly replied ‘y-yes, i-it was. I-I came i-in h-here and l-l-looked for m-my m-m-mirror. I t-then found m-my mirror and l-l-looked at m-myself in t-the m-mirror. W-w-what I-I saw w-was exactly like i-in the p-p-peeph-hole’ Jaz then started shaking again. ‘I’ve never seen you like this before Jaz. What did you see?’ Cindy asked with concern in her voice. ‘y-you r-r-really w-want t-t-to know? W-well their w-were l-lots of t-things. L-like w-we were in a different w-world. T-there were black cats, h-haunted m-m-mansions, broken t-trees w-with markings in t-them, some s-sort of m-mist or f-fog, c-creepy s-s-spiders and other t-things t-t-too’ Ivy and Cindy were shocked when Jaz said what she said. ‘So, what’s why you are shaking? And scared’ Jaz nodded and then looked at the time on the clock on the wall. ‘strange, why has the clock stop?’ Ivy and Cindy then looked towards the clock, noticing that the clock wasn’t working.
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