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Corin Finn, a 16 year old girl, has been locked away in her house pretty much her whole life. Her parents were very over-protective, you see. Never allowed to go out and see her friends, never allowed to go online to communicate. Her life feels like pretty much trash before she meets the girl who saved her life.

published on December 15, 201442 reads 23 readers 13 not completed
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Chapter 2.
Year 6

Year 6

"Morning, daddy.." I said as my father walked into the kitchen in his blood-red dressing gown.
"Mornin' sweetie." He smiled, gaving me a kiss on my forehead and stroking my blonde hair. I giggled cutely and smiled. Today was the first day of Year 6. I was so excited! One more year until I join secondary school and become a pre-teen. I was in my school uniform, sitting at the kitchen table and nomming on some toast. My father was making some toast with strawberry jam and orange juice for my mum. "You're okay to get to school by yourself, right?" He asked, putting the toast and juice on a tray. I nodded, my mouth full of strawberry toast. "Alrighty, good." He nodded and left the kitchen. A few minutes after he left, I finished my toast and grabbed my bag. I slung it over my shoulder and grabbed my house keys before leaving the house, closing and locking the door behind me.

*Time skip to the end of the day*

First day = a blast! I enjoyed it sooooo much! I got to see my friends again and talk with them after a long summer! I skipped to the bus stop, my bag strap jumping up and down on my shoulder. I jumped onto the bus and waited for the half an hour journey home. When I got back, I unlocked the door and stepped in. "I'm back!!" I yelled, slamming the door loudly behind me for 'dramatic' effect.
"Welcome back, hun! How was your first day?" My mother asked, walking into the hallway and smiling at me, her hands behind her back.
"A-MAZ-ING!" I yelled, hugging her tightly and grinning. She nodded, stumbling a bit.
"Good! Now, as a reward of a good day at school. I made you.." She revealed a plate of cookies from behind her back, "..cookies!"
I cheered and snatched a hella load off of the plate, greedily. "Hey, hey, hey! Share!" She said, taking a few off of me. I groaned but then laughed, "Thanks, mum!" I smiled, nomming on one already.
"Alrighty, now go and pack your stuff away and then come and snuggle with me on the sofa." She grinned and walked away, back into the kitchen.
"Okay! Be there in 5!"
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yxhee
It makes me a little sad seeing the personality change her really..
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on December 18, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
That's happening to a friend of mine... her mother has forbidden me from seeing her and I can't talk to her. She has been banned from the internet and seeing friends. I feel sorta bad, like I should've seen it coming...
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GirlsDeMo
Wow..what a b****
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Mcdazzle2000
yea i guess so...
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on December 19, 2014
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on December 18, 2014
GirlsDeMo
That is so annoying.. why would she do something like that? My mum and my best friend's mum wouldn't dare of doing that, because they know that me and my friend have been besties since nursery. 8 years!
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Mcdazzle2000
yea i've known her and her family for like 9 years and they know me. i though i knew them better tho... they say... they say that the reason that i can't see her is that i'm a bad influence on her. they think that she's gonna run away and that i'm gonna help her. her mom even made her block me on qfeast. her username is Aries9100, and I haven't seen her for like See More▼
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on December 18, 2014
GirlsDeMo
Aw..I'm sorry that is so sad D:
If my mum banned me from my best friend (she wouldn't anyway, we hardly ever see each other) I would still find a way to get to her
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Mcdazzle2000
yea i wish i could see her tho cuz she's a grade behind me and in a different school than mine so i can't see her even if i wanted to. her mother even has a cop follow her when she leaves the house for anything other than school, or at least thats what she says. I just wish that i could help her, you know? anyway...
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on December 18, 2014
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on December 18, 2014
gothicskittlescupcake
Interesting
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on December 18, 2014
McDermottsAngel
This is exactly my life. . . :/ That actually sounds so accurately like me.
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GirlsDeMo
aww I'm sorry I didn't know D:
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McDermottsAngel
And one by one, all my friends left.
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on December 15, 2014
McDermottsAngel
It's okay. :/ But my mum always yells at my teachers like that, I'm not allowed to do practically anything, I used to be a happy girl in Year 3 and became depressed in Year 4, etc.
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