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Corin Finn, a 16 year old girl, has been locked away in her house pretty much her whole life. Her parents were very over-protective, you see. Never allowed to go out and see her friends, never allowed to go online to communicate. Her life feels like pretty much trash before she meets the girl who saved her life.

published on December 15, 201445 reads 24 readers 13 not completed
Chapter 1.
Intro

Intro

Hi. My name's Corin. Corin Finn. I'm 16. I have straight black hair, grey eyes and a black personality. For 6 years now I've been locked away in my house, mostly my bedroom. I don't go to school, I'm home schooled. I've lost all my friends, they've moved on since Year 6. Why? My parents..
My mother, she's slightly insane but can sometimes be nice. Once when I was in Year 6, she screamed at my teacher saying that I don't deserve this crap education and I don't need to learn these things because I'm smarter than all of this. She's so wrong in many ways. So instead of school, she's gotten me a special home-school teacher who teaches me the most complicated stuff that I don't understand one bit. It's like my mother doesn't even know who I am! I was born with dyslexia and she's seem to have forgotten that or she's just ignoring the truth! However, she does make me her home made cookies that make me slightly cheered up after ever miserable day.
My father, he's cruel. He threatened to hit me if I didn't get my education together. No wonder he says them things, he's a drunk. Most of the time he's down at the pub, betting and drinking every night with his brutal mates. You always want to get to bed before he gets back, otherwise you'll be dead...
When I was 10, I used to have bright, curly, blonde hair. My eyes used to be a bright blue and my personality was bright too. Then that all changed when my parents got to their mental stage in Year 6. During the middle of Year 6, I dyed my hair black and I put contact lenses in my eyes to make them look grey. From then on, my personality changed and changed into a heartless, depressed, young girl. All thanks to my parents..they made me this way. When my mum found out I dyed my hair, she freaked and locked me in my bedroom for being a 'bad and naughty girl'.
Then, in Year 8, things got worse. I started cutting. I've been isolated in my house for 6 years straight. Each day I got more bored, depressed and beaten with their words or hands. So, I decided it was time to teach myself and them a lesson. So..I cut. I cut to show myself that I was worthless and had no meaning in life. I cut to show my parents how horrid my life was. They didn't pay any attention and they hurt me even harder for cutting. My mum found blood stained tissues and a knife under my bed. She freaked again and hurt me for doing it.

Life just isn't fair..
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yxhee
It makes me a little sad seeing the personality change her really..
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on December 18, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
That's happening to a friend of mine... her mother has forbidden me from seeing her and I can't talk to her. She has been banned from the internet and seeing friends. I feel sorta bad, like I should've seen it coming...
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GirlsDeMo
Wow..what a b****
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Mcdazzle2000
yea i guess so...
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on December 19, 2014
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on December 18, 2014
GirlsDeMo
That is so annoying.. why would she do something like that? My mum and my best friend's mum wouldn't dare of doing that, because they know that me and my friend have been besties since nursery. 8 years!
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Mcdazzle2000
yea i've known her and her family for like 9 years and they know me. i though i knew them better tho... they say... they say that the reason that i can't see her is that i'm a bad influence on her. they think that she's gonna run away and that i'm gonna help her. her mom even made her block me on qfeast. her username is Aries9100, and I haven't seen her for like See More▼
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on December 18, 2014
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on December 18, 2014
GirlsDeMo
Aw..I'm sorry that is so sad D:
If my mum banned me from my best friend (she wouldn't anyway, we hardly ever see each other) I would still find a way to get to her
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Mcdazzle2000
yea i wish i could see her tho cuz she's a grade behind me and in a different school than mine so i can't see her even if i wanted to. her mother even has a cop follow her when she leaves the house for anything other than school, or at least thats what she says. I just wish that i could help her, you know? anyway...
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on December 18, 2014
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on December 18, 2014
gothicskittlescupcake
Interesting
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on December 18, 2014
McDermottsAngel
This is exactly my life. . . :/ That actually sounds so accurately like me.
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GirlsDeMo
aww I'm sorry I didn't know D:
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McDermottsAngel
And one by one, all my friends left.
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on December 15, 2014
McDermottsAngel
It's okay. :/ But my mum always yells at my teachers like that, I'm not allowed to do practically anything, I used to be a happy girl in Year 3 and became depressed in Year 4, etc.
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on December 15, 2014
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