Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

At long last, it's here! You've been waiting for it, and it's the story of Divergent, told in the style of Sonic the Hedgehog!!! The actual Sonic characters are the leaders/representatives, whilst the confirmed OC's are the initiates.

published on May 12, 2014236 reads 28 readers 27 not completed
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Chapter 11.

"First Jumper - Jackie!"

Jackie
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These last few minutes of my life has been exhilarating! We climbed up onto a railing, then jumped onto a moving train, then off that train onto a roof! Incredible! And I've already met two amazing friends: Sapphire and Leat.
"Everybody listen up!" someone shouts. We all crowd around the ledge, where a black hedgehog with red stripes stands. "My name is Shadow, and I am one of the Dauntless leaders. So far, you've done well to make it this far. But to make it into Dauntless Headquarters, you need to jump off this ledge into the hole down there." He then points to down below.
It must be a long way down.
Someone then asks "Is there water at the bottom or something?"
"Well, you'll find out when you jump," Shadow replies. "But someone has to jump first. So, who's going to be the brave soul to jump first?"
For a few moments everyone stands in complete silence. We all wait for someone to speak up to say they'll jump first. But no one does.
Suddenly, I feel that part of my body is shrieking "You jump first! You're brave. Show it to them!"
I can't hold it in.
"Me," I say. Everyone turns to face me in utter shock.
I'm not surprised at the look on their faces. No one expects someone from Abnegation to volunteer to jump first.
I walk over to the ledge and look below. The hole is quite big. I'm sure I can take it though.
I climb up onto the ledge. The wind is strong. Inhale, exhale. I can do this.
And I jump.
It's a long way down, and I fall through the hole, and land into a net. I bounce a few times but then I'm completely still.
That. Was. Awesome!
Someone then grabs a hold of the net and reaches his hand out to me. "You get pushed?" he asks.
"No," I say. "I volunteered to jump first."
"What's your name?"
I look at him. He is a dark blue hedgehog with green eyes. He seems kind. "Jackie."
He then looks up to the hole and shouts "First jumper: Jackie!" He then looks at me. "Welcome to Dauntless."
I smile. We then move out of the way so the others can jump. A Candor initiate is the second to jump. It's kind of funny watching him bounce about on the net like I did.
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Comments (27)

DarkSpite_Spark56
@Weiss_Schnee I am loving this story, when is the next chapter coming? Because this so cool.
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on June 21, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
I'm so sad she's gone it was a great story
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on March 18, 2018
sapphirethehedgehog
The other commet you put about christina
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Weiss_Schnee
Because it's a spoiler, and since you haven't read the story, I can't let you know about it.
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sapphirethehedgehog
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on June 14, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Don't worry, we're not far from it now anyway. Couple more bits we need to get through first.
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on June 14, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
:( awwww
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on June 14, 2014
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on June 14, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Block what?
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on June 12, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Awww! Jackie why did you block it! DX Lol Somebody tell me!
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on June 11, 2014
Cristallite
I think i know since I read th book :3
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on May 27, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Yeah well guess what? Since you're like Christina in this, there's still more. And unfortunately you end up *This part has been blocked for spoiler reasons.*
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on May 26, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
^O^ I helped you on the train!
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on May 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on May 20, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Wow, this is really cool, are the next chapter how we all meet?
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on May 17, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on May 14, 2014
Cristallite
Yeah
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on May 14, 2014
Frostgoddess
WOOHOO! AWESOME! SO LEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 13, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
I was planning to XD
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on May 13, 2014
Frostgoddess
On part two, can you put Leat's P.O.V.? Please?
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on May 13, 2014
Cristallite
Nice!
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on May 13, 2014
Cristallite
Thumbs up!
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on May 13, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Like in Divergent itself, Tris is Divergent, she's a transfer, but a Dauntless-born (Uriah) is also Divergent, though it is not confirmed until the 2nd book, Insurgent.
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on May 12, 2014
Frostgoddess
Nice! But BOTH are Divergent? Really? XD That was unexpected.
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on May 12, 2014
Frostgoddess
cool!
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on May 12, 2014
Cristallite
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on May 12, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Glad you like it :)
There's still more to come. And it's not just told from Jackie's view, oh no!
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on May 12, 2014
Cristallite
Awesome!!
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on May 12, 2014