Essay i made for my class

Essay the i made for my class just really random it kinda weirda most of them are from 7th and 8th. I suck at writing so enjoy!!

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Chapter 2.

Hitler

Before you Jude me I pick it was easy.
        
The goal of a “Superior race”, a country filled with blond haired blue eyed, very smart, people, was the ideas of one of the most famous bad people in history. That person would be Adolf Hitler. He ordered the deaths of jew, handicap, and gays.
Hitler was born on Easter Sunday on april 20, 1889. Which was a Coincidence  Easter means new life but hitler schemes killed innocent.  During Hitler's childhood  his father often took his problem out on Adolf and his siblings. He had  6 siblings. Most  of them in early childhood. Between the ages of 6 and 8 Adolf  made high marks and was acting properly in class.  In elementary school he would be the leading them in games.
1905 when Hitler was 16 he did not have to go to school. Adolf was nationless for 7 year. He longed to be a part of the German Empire, even thought He was born in Austrian. He was rejected twice from art school. Even  though he was rejected from art school, he tried to make a living out of selling his artwork. Hitler never went to a Single Concentration Camp.
Hitler  did not create the nazis party. Adolf Hitler wasn’t on drugs until when he joined Nazi party. He  siped on the nazies  before joining. His Full Moustache Nearly Killed Him but, i did make him Temporarily Blinded in ww1. Hitler Was Nominated For Nobel Peace Prize in 1939, given to those who work towards peace. Hitler Used to Take Cocaine Twice a Day on a daily basis.
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Forest_Nany
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on February 01, 2022
Suzuki
Essay number 4: Yikes, bullying.
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on November 30, 2020
Suzuki
What if you revise the essays you wrote and show us a before and after? It'd be so cool!
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Xminus
I'll try it ( i will do it when im on xmas break) @Suzuki
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Xminus
i might change the plot line to Kidnapped(i made it last year at last minute) @Suzuki
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on November 28, 2020
Suzuki
Especially "Kidnapped". :P
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on November 27, 2020