Last of your Tribe

Last of your Tribe

You Had to hide.. but from who. of course hide form the invaders you watched them slaughter all your tribe members but some got taking away you hear the cries of your people the war cry the battle the invasion until you notice your the last one.

published on December 06, 201681 reads 11 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 8.
chapter 5 : (End of part three ) Sad news

chapter 5 : (End of part three ) Sad news

~hey my readers this is the last sad news  part then it go on with it I guess im not sure how to word that oh well  I hope you enjoy this  story im very happy you my readers love this zstory  im still thinking up so things  but right now  ON WITH THE FREAKY STORY oh and might be gore in there be prepared I guess ~




~no one pov~



It happen all s fast the enemy tribe soon ambush the Tribe of Rain for their Sun goddess  they hated the Night goddess for several reasons to list them off  now...

1. She the opposite

2. weak

3. she hate their kind ...

4. she never saved them


5. not the same as the Sun goddess

that's some of the reasons  though the true reasons  for the Night goddess she tried to get people to trust her  , top believe in her, not to fear her, not to hate her. True she the opposite from the Sun goddess she doesn't have the light beauty or her snotty attitude though Night goddess her attitude / personality is what is unique she cares for her [people that believes her she protects them unlike the Sun goddess that lies to them saying that's she will protect them but she give them the power to destroy the tribes that are her enemy no Night goddess is not like the Sun goddess she not war she the healer  the Sun goddess is light and war but the Sun goddess people believes  she the Mercy , Life and love... while they believe that Nigh5t goddess is War , evil, darkness, hate, jealous , rage... it the opposite for the two goddess. well never mind about the goddess now back to whats happen TO THE TRIBE of Rain ..  The fighting is all you can hear the clashing sounds of daggers and random tools they found on the ground Arrows flies through the air piercing anything that's in there way screaming, shouting , battle cry all heard around the lands it echo through the land letting their goddess knows that they are fighting for the land or family or their worshipping to prove they are stronger than the other tribe. On top of that some of the enemy was searching for the next generation chief to end their life so there no more tribe of Rain to that there will be no more Night goddess believers.







~your pov~

"All I was hearing is shout and screaming I don't even know whats happing  right now I want my mother where is she  im scared right now" I whispered to myself. Then I heard rushing footsteps and see some of the guards run forward now the women herd us kids to a corner to protect us and they stood in front of us with their daggers and bow yes women are not the only one with weapons who said females cant fight well here in my tribe everyone has to learn to fight and to protect each other from the danger and today is the day I never thought would of happen in front of my own innocent eyes. Well im not the only one with innocent eyes  their many more with innocent eyes behind me. The yelling got louder the clashing and the arrows zipping hoof beats on the ground too many chaos happening in my Tribe.... Tribe of the Rain  what is the hope  is there any of it left...  I looked up at the night starry sky and frown and spoke to the sky" Night Goddess please save us from the chaos we need your strength your guidance lend us a helping hand are we safe or are we going to disappear to join the sky with you and the other goddess".  The foot steps of the enemies gotten close trying to get close to  us "there no where to run" Wailed  Nikki who was a 6 years old Dark hair  girl she was one of my best friends basically I had all the kids in our tribe as my friends but my best friends are Nikki, Jay, Leaf, Dew and Rain but any ways back to the moment.  The Women standing in front of us ran forward blocking each hit  like it normal training for them but one slip up they are gone for good so I decided to take the chance and motion the other tribe kids to follow me and ran the other way  and jumps down in a cave hole and slides down the smooth surface  in the cave  the water drips and pitter patter echo through out the tunnel in the cave underground. As we landed on the flat surface we all started to run to escape the chaos to find a way out hoping there a way to not get caught but our luck has ended in front of us was the enemies standing their with their weapons point at us we.... been ... caught . NO I WILL NOT LET MY TRIBE I SOON BE LEADER I WILL BE LIKE MY FATHER AND MOTHER AND NEVER GIVE UP  I got to keep my tribe safe after all im the Prince/Princess of the tribe. They took their slow steady steps every inch the enemies move we move backwards they start to speed up and stumble a bit until we were trapped in one area I put my self in front  to risk my life to save my friends and tribe  kids  im not letting them hurt.







~ No one pov~


In the shadows of the cave stood The queen of the Rain Tribe where was she all this time well she was at a secret place called the wishing water she realize the Night goddess was right their was trouble her child only child was in danger she has to save him. As soon the Queen of Rain tribe ran to go find the kids of the tribes in the caves she could hear the foot steps of the enemies and their barking orders commander so she knew she was getting closer to the kids they would always come down here to explorer her fate has come she knew what to do when she get to the kids. It took her awhile to get to the kids once she seen them trapped in a small space looking like helpless prey from the predators. She ran unsheathe her two dagger and flings across from the other side of the cave and hit one of the enemies in the back.





~Queen of Rain tribe Pov~


As the enemies looked at their falling comrade they turned to face me and raised their weapons shouting at me saying that I should stand down for being a queen ha im not standing down not when my tribe is endanger I want to save them especially my dear child. I gripped my dagger and see them turn and ready to aim at the kids that looked scared but one  My child stood their arms spread to defend their tribe well their time is not up not even ever they are the goal to save  the tribe. I bolted forward  before the first arrow was let go I stood in front of the small space blocking the way where the kids were hiding in the next thing I knew was the arrow piercing  my chest  as the blood flow from the wound I looked at the enemies and shouted at them " im the QUEEN OF THE RAIN TRIBE YOU HAVE CAUSED THE WAR WITH MY TRIBE YOU TRIED TO GET RID OF US BUT ONE SHALL SAVE  THE TRIBE THAT IS WHAT IS LEFT WHEN I FALLEN SOME ONE WILL TAKE MY PLACE NOBODY WILL RUIN THE TRIBE OF RAIN  not even you  I call upon the goddess of night that I completed my fate guide me to the stars of your home and as I travel there I shall help guide the followers of the goddess Night and bring down your goddess she has no right to bring the wrath upon us  we never  started the war you did remember that " I gasped for air  only to fall to the ground as the blood  pooled around me my vision gotten blurry I see the enemies started to retreat in a hurry and I smiled knowing my word hurt them and turn their minds to think of what they have done they cant judge us not even a little one judge turn us to go against them making enemies. I only saw my child running towards me that's when everything went black that's when I saw the night goddess her self again only to hold her hand out for me to take  I took her hand and turn and see my body on the ground see my child and the other children crowed  my lifeless body crying and shouting I felt sad seeing them in pain especially  my child but I completed my goal im the first of the tribe to join the Night goddess to help serve and guide the lost night believers into our land of the night starry sky and help with the believers that are alive I soon turned to the darkness and disappear and ended up in the sky watching over the tribe chasing out the enemies showing how they can be dangerous too. That my Tribe  "im so sorry im not with you now" I turned away from the view of the tribe.




~ Y/N pov~



I cant believe it my .. mother she gone  please don't be gone.  I ran over to my mother body and tried to wake her up " Mom .. mom wake up please wake up I need you we need you please wake up I don't want you to sleep forever wake up please wake up please" I soon realize that she not waking up and I started to feel the tears slide down my face onto the ground and the other children were wailing for their lost of the Queen along with me she was my mother I wont be able to see her ever again. We heard shouting from one of the tunnel that when I saw Father and I got up and ran to him crying  hugging him and pointed to mom body only to see his reaction sad and afraid I didn't know what was going on now but I only know that they took my mother life.







~ No one pov~


As the chief told the whole tribe that the Queen of rain tribe had sacrifice herself to save the children lives from the enemies there was a up roar of angry tribe members shouting that they should do the same to the other tribe queen for revenge of their lost queen but a little voice spoke out and everyone looked to see who it was and they saw the child of the queen N/Y. They all went silent and Y/N stand next to Her/His father  and waited to talk He/She spoke " I am N/Y  L/N (last name  if you don't know ) I witness the murder of my mother  or sacrifice  that she done but going to the other tribe  will not do anything to get revenge listen to my words very clearly it not fair  that killed our queen but the truth is she sacrifice herself  so it aint right to go to the other tribe killing off their queen  to show revenge I say we rebuild our tribe and make it stronger than ever before more station to protect our borders more training I think but it not right to  cause war  with them they learned their lesson if they want more  then they fight first they have to throw the first fist" as Y/N finished the tribe people started to agree and cheer for the young Prince/Princess for giving them  the right decision the young Prince/Princess father smiled and agreed and started to bark out orders and started to help rebuild while other started to make an important feast for the Queen sacrifice  death to honor her for the good she did for her tribe. To the end of the night they all shared their thoughts of the queen and say their respect to the Chief and the Prince/Princess they all danced and honored the night goddess and Queen of rain  by feasting and dancing showing them the respect to them for saving them and helping them. Soon after that they all went to sleep the camp was full of silence as the night goes on while the Queen of rain watched her tribe  sleep during the night with a couple of guards guarding the borders. She hope one day she makes it up for leaving the earth.




~hey my readers it was a long chapter I hope you like it  it took me a while to finished that chapter geez it took me weeks to think and weeks to write it well the next chapter should be soon  sea ya later ~
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Phantasm
We should be able to choose
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nyxshattered
ok then I will leave it the way it is thanks you for your opinion @Female_Mike_Schmidt_and_Freddy_Fazbear
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Phantasm
I like it
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