For You

For You

Hinata Hyuga had loved Naruto since... forever. Then this dark haired, light eyed boy came into town. He was better that Sasuke in everything! And he, she had to admit, was better looking than Naruto. But that didnt change anything. Then, one day, he stole more than a few coins from her... (I realize that my stories are wierd. But their more or less alternate dimesnions.)

published on April 20, 201774 reads 15 readers 96 completed
Chapter 1.
Sesa

Sesa

Hinata was hanging out with Ino and Sakura when Naruto ran up, excited as usual.

"Guys! Guys! You goota come see this!" He says, pointing to the gate. "Theres this guy and he has a sword and-"
"Naruto, calm down! Sheesh, cant we go five miniutes without you having a heart attack?" Sakura asks, standing up.

"He's got black hair, icy eyes, and he's as pale as snow! Do you think he's a vampire?" He asks, getting a smack from Sakura.
"You idiot, vampires dont exist!"

"On the contrary," a masculine voice intervenes, scaring them. "Im more or less like that wolf-boy over there." The mysterious boy says, pointing to Kiba.
"Hello, Im Sakura Haruno. Welcome to Kohonagakure!" She says politely.
  
The boy smirks, takes her hand, and kisses it.
"The pleasure is all mine, Lady Haruno." He curtsies. "My name is Sesa Okomota. It is a great pleasure to meet you all."

Ino eyed him cautiously. "You dont have a band." She says bluntly, motioning to his head.
"Right you are. I belong to a nomadic ninja tribe, and we dont essentially believe in 'bands'. But thats in the past. Im here to migrate to Kohonagakure." He says, adjusting his sword.

"Where are they?" Naruto asks. "Did you leave them or..."
"Their dead. Slaughtered to the last, except me." He says, frowning. "And when I find the man who did it..." he snarled, and his fangs were evident.

Hinata gasped.
He looked a lot like Sasuke, but at the same time he also looked more like Naruto. His jet black hair was like Sasuke's, but his demeanor was like Naruto.

In short:
A very hard person to read.

"The Hokage's office is this way." Ino said, turning and leading him to the office.
Naruto leans in Sakura's ear and says, "Was it just me or was she-" before he notices that she was blushing, too.

He narrowed his eyes, crossed his arms, then huffed. "I dont like him already." He says, leaving Hinata to think.
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Casual_Red
interesting
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xXEmo_KingXx
How are you reading this so fast?!
XD
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xXEmo_KingXx
Lol idk I just like to take my time to read my stories and judge them.
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on November 13, 2017
Casual_Red
??
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on November 13, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
°-°
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on November 13, 2017
Casual_Red
i'm a quick reader
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on November 13, 2017
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on November 13, 2017
TylerWay
You know what? That ending was exceptional. It was unexpected like Romeo and Juliet o(≧∇≦o). Sesa was not prepared for Hinata.
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TylerWay
Damn, that was a good ending@xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Done.
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on April 28, 2017
TylerWay
Suspense +Curiosity+ Anticipation+ Excitement= Me dies from them Σ(*ノ´>ω<。`)ノ
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on April 28, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Wait and see
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on April 28, 2017
TylerWay
What is it going to be about? (ノ・д・)ノ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 28, 2017
TylerWay
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! ୧༼✿ ͡◕ д ◕͡ ༽୨
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on April 28, 2017
TylerWay
THERE'S GOING TO BE MORE?!! YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! (۶* ‘ꆚ&rsquo۶” ˭̡̞(◞⁎˃ᆺ˂)◞*✰ (╯✧∇✧)╯ ヾ(。・ω・)シ
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xXEmo_KingXx
Thanks! I love using my OC so much, Im adding him in the next story.
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TylerWay
She's kicking Sesa ass, yeah! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
Hinata snapped! She killed Kakashi and Orichimaru!
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TylerWay
SHE'S HAS TURNED YANDERE! 。゚(TヮT)゚。
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TylerWay
YYYAAASSS!!! (。☉౪ ⊙。) @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol I shall write some more!
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
Just like me! (☉ε ⊙ノ)ノ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
My point exactly. The whole point of this story is this:

Even seemingly normal people can be utterly insane.
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
Yep, they were shy. @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
*remembers all of the anime characters that have snapped*
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
True @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Shy people usually snap under extreme cercumstances.
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TylerWay
I loved it. Shy quiet Hinata is now a Yandere. YYYAASS! (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup!
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
And she kidnapped Sesa! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
That was good@xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
The Clone chapter was great! O hope he does prove him wrong. @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
Maybe...
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TylerWay
Yeeessss! ᗜಠ o ಠ)¤=[]:::::> @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Hehehe. Ill work on the next chapter immediately!
Hops on horse and rides like a samurai*
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
There is going to be deaths, my demon soul is happy. ╰(◉ᾥ◉)╯ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Maaaaaaaaaayyybeeee...
Maybe you should be
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
(」゜ロ゜)」 now I'm worried for Hinata @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
Yes I have...Why, is something like that going to happen? (○□○)
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on April 27, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Ever read Romeo and Juliet?
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on April 27, 2017
TylerWay
That means there will be deaths and tragedy!@xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Maybe.
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on April 27, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
@xXEmo_KingXx! Hi!
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
Hey!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Hey, @a.amaducci1122. Im sorry I havent been able to respond. It wont verify my account.
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xXEmo_KingXx
Me too.
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
I'm glad we are together!!
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
^///^
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
You are the best!
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Of course. Anything for you.
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
You said we could talk there, right?
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Im back. And I mentioned you in a post.
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
I'll be here, counting the minutes until you're back!
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Ok, if you say so. Ill mention you in my page! Brb
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
*Hugs back* It's fine... don't worry...
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Me sowwy.
Huggles*
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on April 26, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
I know...
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TylerWay
Chapter 8
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TylerWay
Yes it was!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yay!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Relally?
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
OMFG! THAT WAS GREAT!!
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TylerWay
No problem
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Grazei, amico.
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
Will do so @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Could you possibly send a message to my girlfriend? You know, the girl I asked out yesterday? Could you please tell her that the site wont verify my account, so I cant remessage her? Id be grateful if you did.
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
Yes and what is it? @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Could you do me a favor, @TylerWay?
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TylerWay
Orichimaru is his father =-O
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TylerWay
Orichimaru is the ultimate bad guy, is the battle going to end with a fatal wound? @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
XD yes it is. ( ̄ω ̄)
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
XD
*dies from laughter cause trollin is awesome*
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
But not this chapter.
XD
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
Yay! Deaths! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Yup!
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
Yes! An ominous sentence! Will there be ant deaths? @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
But wait for chapter 8, dear friend!
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
The anticipation will kill me @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Perhaps. I have a LOT more twists and turns in this story.
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
Imagines Kakashi as a father. Remembers training with Naruto. Remembers the books.
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Really? It was either going to be Orichimaru or Kakashi. I decided the ultimate bad guy.
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TylerWay
Doing good. The father surprised me. That was a good twist @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Fine. You?
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on April 26, 2017
TylerWay
Hey you, how you doing? @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
Wow, Hinata stopped the fight. Though I would've liked if one of them became wounded, future battle maybe? (ノ*゜▽゜*)
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TylerWay
∩(︶▽︶)∩, It will be an epic, deadly battle!!!
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on April 25, 2017
TylerWay
o(≧∇≦o)
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on April 25, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Hell yeah!
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on April 25, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Oh hell yeah
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on April 25, 2017
TylerWay
Hinata! She's over Naruto now. @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
I know! Heheheh I try to make ever fanfic I write to the point where it shows a main character doing something thats out of their league or just straight up them. Also, i added another chapter to The Beginning of Nothing.
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TylerWay
I shall go and read it
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on April 25, 2017
TylerWay
Poor Naruto!!! Is Hintana going to get stolen from him?
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on April 24, 2017