Mobius Paradox

Mobius Paradox

Two dimensions,one peaceful and full of adventures...the other ruled by Eggman,with only a few mobians still alive or not robot. One day they have been connected, and the chaos was released. Only a few heroes can bring peace now.

published on January 14, 201662 reads 14 readers 41 not completed
Chapter 1.

Chapter 1: Prologue "Into the chaos"

2nd Dimension, in the middle of Eggman's attack...
Everyone is running, escaping, caring only of themselves.
"RUN! TAILS!" Yelled Sonic with all the breath he had, to overcome the loud noises of the destruction of the city.
"SONIC! HEL-AAAARGH!"A laser beam hit Tails, piercing him from side to side.
"TAAAILS!"
The little fox's body was on the ground,dead.
Shadow:-"Sonic, we must go!"He was seriously injuried,he could barely stand.
Sonic:-"I CAN'T LEAVE TAILS!"
Shadow:- "He's dead! And we too if we don't move!"
A lot of robots surrounded'em.
Shadow:- "Damn..."
Sonic:- "T-tails...rrrgh...CURSED YOU EGGMAN!CURSED YOU!"
Sonic's fur then turned darker, a dark-blue aura coming out from is body...
Sonic:- "I'M GONNA KILL YOU EGGMAN!DO YOU HEAR ME? I'LL KILL YOU!"
Shadow:- "Sonic!Don't get yourself carried in the darkness!Sonic!"
A laught interrupted them.
"OHOHOHOH...look who we have got here...Shadow and Sonic...Hey, where is Tails mh? You lost him? Ahahaha!"
Sonic:- "SHUT UP! Eggman...you killed all of my friends...Knuckles...Amy...Silver...even Tails now...I will never forgive you!
"Really do you think I care if you do it?Ah, don't make me laugh."
Sonic jumped to hit Eggman, but he was blocked by an energy barrier.
"Eheh,do you like my shield?"
"You, bastard!"
"Uh, what a rude thing to say. You need a little lesson in manners!"
A large electric shock left Eggman's shield, crashing down on Sonic.
Sonic endured it, thinking about his friends killed by Eggman, saying to himself "I can't give up,I must do it!",then a miriad of laser pierced trough his body,and...with a last groan...
Sonic the Hedgehog died...the last thing he heard...was Eggman's laugh...
All happened so quickly...Shadow couldn't believe it.He wanted to fight.But he had to survive instead.To fight again another day...to get help.
Even if it disgusted him, he retired.
Using his last energies to use the chaos control, he teleported himself in the only safe place there were now on the entire Mobius.
In the old Eggman's base. He knew that Eggman was still holding his dimensional-portal.So he turned it on, and went in, hoping that whatever was on the other side, it would help.
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Dead_Misfortune
Creepy o.O
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Dead_Misfortune
Point taken
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on February 25, 2016
Toa_Bora
Redik: Hey, I'm a demon after all. Without a demoniac nature what kind of demon I would be?
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on February 25, 2016
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on February 25, 2016
Queen_Miku
Whoa, f*cking dark.
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on February 25, 2016
Queen_Miku
He wants that action....
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! *wink wink nudge nudge*
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Toa_Bora
*Facepalm*
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Queen_Miku
XD I had to, okay?
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
Queen_Miku
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
HOO HOO HOO, I FOUND SOMETHING FOR JACKIE TO TEASE HIM ABOUT! XD
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Toa_Bora
Don't you dare
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Queen_Miku
Jackie: Alright, deal.
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on January 21, 2016
Toa_Bora
Redik: ...Ok...but don't do that again ok? I feel bad enough without these jokes.
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
Jackie: I only did that to take the nightmare off my mind so I could sleep again!
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on January 21, 2016
Toa_Bora
Redik: I'm sorry that you still do that nightmare...but that is not a good reason to take pictures of someone who feel alone!
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
Jackie: *nods* Under Eggman's influence...
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on January 21, 2016
Toa_Bora
Redik: Sonic that shot you?
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
Jackie: Just said. I couldn't sleep that night because I had THAT nightmare again...
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on January 21, 2016
Toa_Bora
Redik: Why did you do that?
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
Jackie: *winks* Snuck into your room one night when I couldn't sleep. I couldn't help myself, and took pics. Sent them to Sonic the next morning.
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on January 21, 2016
Toa_Bora
Redik: What?! Where did you take these?!
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
Jackie: I know that you kissed your pillow pretending it was her! I got pics of it! *shows him*
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on January 21, 2016
Toa_Bora
Redik: You don't know that...maybe...
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
Jackie: REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND! THAT HE'LL NEVER SEE AGAIN!
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
Eep... what's gonna happen to them now?
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Toa_Bora
I don't know...any idea?
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Toa_Bora
Thanks, but I have it already.Eheh.
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
I don't have any good ideas, but I know something that can help.
When I'm stuck for action ideas, I usually listen to a kick-ass music, with a kick-ass beat! Here, I'll give you one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QImBolnTVH8
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
Queen_Miku
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT MADE ME BLUSH!!!!!!
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on January 20, 2016
Toa_Bora
Ok,if someone want to be in the story, he/she has only to say it, and I will try to put him/her in.
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Dead_Misfortune
Okay,
Name: Scarlette the wolf
Age: 36
Looks: https://www.qfeast.com/Electpurr_the_electric_cat/profile/photo/f1aHxe
Crush: Is married to Shadow the hedgehog and has a 14 year old daughter named Mystic(what Mystic looks like):https://www.qfeast.com/page/tdwTQ9/A-page-for-when-I-run-out-space/photo/e1ZPLX See More▼
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Toa_Bora
Ok, I'll start to work on that.
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on January 19, 2016
Dead_Misfortune
Possibly 36
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on January 19, 2016
Toa_Bora
Is that right?
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on January 19, 2016
Toa_Bora
So, she had Mystic at 12...
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on January 19, 2016
Dead_Misfortune
Wait sorry i meant she is 26
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on January 19, 2016
Toa_Bora
Only a question: how can she have a 14 years old daughter if she's 20?
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
Toa_Bora
ok, give me the info and I'll put her in the story
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on January 19, 2016
Dead_Misfortune
Could Scarlette be in it if thats okay? I'll give you the info about her
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
Queen_Miku
KISS, KISS, FALL IN LOVE!
(I had to! Cuz of that kiss scene! XD)
(Lyrics from Ouran High School Host Club )
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on January 17, 2016
Dead_Misfortune
LOVE IT!
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Dead_Misfortune
Yes it's really good so far keep up the good work.
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on January 14, 2016
Toa_Bora
Really?
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on January 14, 2016