What Did I Do Wrong?

What Did I Do Wrong?

She didn't want this to happen. She didn't plan for it to happen. But it did. But why?

published on August 072 reads 2 readers 1 not completed


Cry sobbed, staring at Alice. Alice backed up, tears in her eyes. She grabbed the gun from the wall, looking back at Cry, who was tied up. She stared at Cry with a sniffle, then took a deep breath. She took her phone out, putting it beside her and pressing 'record'.

"Hey everyone. It's me, Alice. And...well...this is my suicide note. I said I'll always survive but here I am, killing myself! Life is just fun, ain't it? But...I have no hope anymore. And I know Cry will find someone else to love her and care for her as much as I do. Maybe more. But, let's get on with it. Dear father and mother, where have you two been my whole life? I only met you all a few weeks ago but I already love you two. I'm glad I had a chance to meet you all before death. Keep my lovely Cry alive for me, please. That's all I have to say to you all." Alice continued, her voice getting shakier as Cry's sobs continued. "Dear everyone who hurt Cry, what the hell is wrong with you? Why did you hurt her? She doesn't deserve the treatment she gets. She deserves love, you idiots! I'm ashamed of you all. And to Shade...hey. I understand all the shit you grow through. It's hard, but you and your older sister, Cry, can both make it through it. I know you two can. I know you'll find the one you will love forever, your soulmate. I dont know when, but no matter what happens I know you and your love will make it through. And keep Cry safe and alive." Alice stopped to take a deep breath, her voice shaky. "Cry, I'm going to say yours off recording..."

Alice had said her words to Cry, hugging her through it all. Both were sobbing. Cry's pleads got muffled by the tape as she continued sobbing, her body shaking. "I'm sorry, sweetheart. I...I cant do this anymore. You be safe and survive, okay? You'll find someone new, I know you will. Your to perfect not to." Alice said, kissing Cry. Cry continued sobbing, knowing she couldn't stop Alice. Alice had her mind made up. Alice kissed Cry's cheek, then stood and walked backwards.

Alice whispered, "I love you so much, Cry.", as she raised the gun to the side of her head.

Gun shot. Alice fell to the ground, the gun out of her hands as the blood dripped down her head and onto the floor. She was dead, she was gone. Cry sobbed, unable to move from where she had been tied up. All she could do was sob, sob, and sob. She had to watch as her girlfriend lay still on the ground, blood in a pool around her. Cry choked down her puke, as she continued sobbing. She didn't want this to happen. She didn't mean for it to happen.

But it did.

But why?
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on August 07