The future of mobius (my character story)

The future of mobius (my character story)

The credit doesn't go to me it goes to lily icicle, I repeat the credit does NOT go to me goes to lily icicle

published on January 28, 2015126 reads 24 readers 40 not completed
Chapter 1.

Eggman has gotten what he wanted...

--Before--
Crystal the cat was walking to her favorite video game store, she was a block away until she couldn't move, she couldn't speak, she didn't even blink. Then she was harshly pushed into the building next to her, crashing into the window. She groaned and realized she can move again and....she got up had a couple bruises and cuts but she was fine....until she got to her left eye.....it was...robotisized. Fear quickly flushed in her body, her whole left eye and part of her cheek was robotic. She looked out the broken window then Amy, her friend, harshly grabbed her black sweater and forced her out the building by pulling her. Amy was a robot and the other möbian and the other. Robot after robot there were only robot möbians, she thought she was having a nightmare. She soon realized she being dragged by her best friend since she got to möbius, she squirmed and kicked and screamed. Then she demanded Amy "AMY. LET GO, NOW!!!!!" Amy stopped and looked at her and said "All MobIAns MUsT BE RobOtISiZED." Crystal's eyes grew in fear and anger, she kicked the back of Amy's knee then flipped her to her stomach "I'm so sorry Amy." Crystal mumbles before running off into the ally. She ran and ran until she came up to a building, an old building, with a broken window and she hopped in it and hid from the things she used to call 'friends' but......not anymore. She knew that Eggman finally got what he wanted and took away she had. She got depressed and angry for what Eggman did and she was going to revenge.....but first....she needed to survive the horrible mess Eggman created.

P.S I request for you to understand what's happening right now. Is to read Lilyicicle's story first 'the future of möbius' the real story, this is just my character POV. Don't worry I asked her first BEFORE I wrote this so don't report me, please.
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Comments (40)

SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Oh, I'm such a bad@$$ xD
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CrystalGem13
Haha
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on April 02, 2015
ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
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on March 27, 2015
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on March 27, 2015
Taesthetic
AWESOME :3
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CrystalGem13
Thanks!
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on March 26, 2015
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on March 26, 2015
PearlTheHedgehog
OMG, CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! ITS AWESOME, GIRL!!!
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CrystalGem13
Whoa 😅 thank you!
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on March 15, 2015
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on March 15, 2015
Taesthetic
This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!
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CrystalGem13
Thanks!!!!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
its not cool.......

ITS A-MAZE-ING-LY AWESOME!
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CrystalGem13
Thank you! Your character is next 😄
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ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
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on February 22, 2015
CrystalGem13
Yep maybe tomorrow I'll put the next chapter
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on February 22, 2015
ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
really? wow! can't wait to read the next chapter!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Taesthetic
Cool!!
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CrystalGem13
Thank you!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
DeadPunkette
I love it! :3
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CrystalGem13
Can you send me a link of her?
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CrystalGem13
Got it
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on February 22, 2015
DeadPunkette
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on February 22, 2015
DeadPunkette
Sure!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
CrystalGem13
Thank you!
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CrystalGem13
Your welcome
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on February 22, 2015
DeadPunkette
Raven the hedgebat please. Thank you!
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on February 22, 2015
CrystalGem13
You did? But I did it get it
You know what this is the ONLY time I'm going to do this
What character do you want to put in this?
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on February 22, 2015
DeadPunkette
Is it too late to ask for one of my characters to be in there? I requested one and it wasn't on the list.
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
The names actually 'Swift Element The Dark HedgeWolf' But close enough!!! Love it! Can't wait for the next chap!!
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CrystalGem13
Oops sorry and thank you!
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SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Sure thing! 😜
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
CrystalGem13
Last day to get some characters I already have
Octavia the wolf bot
Swift the dark hedgewolf
Lana the wolf
Ruby the hedgebat See More▼
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CrystalGem13
Hmmm times up I guess I'll just random pick
Rouge and well blaze is-
Silver: *frown*
Uh- *eyes widen* I'll just put Connor
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on February 09, 2015
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on February 02, 2015
Milea
Cool!
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CrystalGem13
Thankz
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
CrystalGem13
Thankz for catching that I'll change it once the times up
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TricksterOfLife
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
TricksterOfLife
Its awesome! But there's a little typo. Celina's full name is Celina Shadows, not Celina The Cat. Sowwy it bugs meh x3
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on January 30, 2015
CrystalGem13
Ok! You three can be in it I just have think somethin up to squeeze you guys in the story
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on January 29, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Can I be in it? :3 Love it btw!
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on January 28, 2015
MelodyTheHedgebat
Can melody be in it?
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on January 28, 2015
OctaviaTheWolfbot
I'll be in it if you want, nice job so far!!!
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on January 28, 2015