Code Diamond

Code Diamond

Diamond the hedgehog is a regular Mobian. She doesn't know she's the daughter of a famous secret agent and wanted by two squads. The "Secret Darkness" a group of evil mobians and the "Legend Agents" which want to help her and protect her from the "Secret Darkness."

published on July 30, 2014169 reads 30 readers 109 not completed
Chapter 1.

Chapter 1 | The Start

Diamond's P.O.V

I always thought I was just a normal girl. As far ad I knew, I had regular parents and no siblings. That was what I thought. The adventure started long before the action. When I was about... 6 or 7. It was a regular night in Mobious. I was lying in my bed, almost asleep. Then I heard "the noise." It sounded almost like whispers. Sometimes I heard laughs too, and I'm probably freaking you out by now, but on rare occasions I even saw shadows move outside my window... Being so young at the time, I didn't pay much attention to them... As I didn't know those people watching me from outside my window, would change my future...

The real adventure started much later when I was 15 years old. The noises outside my window hadn't stopped, but I'd gotten used to them. One night I was lying in bed. All of a sudden I hear a "crack" sound and jump out of bed. "W-who's there?" I whisper shakily. Then, I see my window has been smashed and shattered to pieces. "Oh my gosh!" I exclaim as my eyes widen at the sight. I spin around and look at my vast room. "Who's there?!" I demand, this time with confidence. No reply. I grab a ruler from my desk and walk around my room cautiously. "If they come out I can whack them with this..." I think. Suddenly I feel a hand grab my wrist. "Oh my—" I start.

I whack whoever's holding my wrist with the ruler and they let go. I look around for the light switch in my dark room. Suddenly another person grabs my ankle and I fall to the ground. I hear footsteps and try to stand up, yet the hand is still clinging on to both my ankles. Suddenly my door flies open and my mom is standing there with a concerned look. "Are you ok?" She asks. "T-there where people attacking me! The window!" I exclaim. My mom looks at the window... To my surprise it isn't smashed... There is no hand holding onto my wrist... "W-what?!" I stutter. "Maybe it was a bad dream. Just get off the floor and go to sleep..." She warns. I nod as she closes the door. There where no more noises that night... But the shattered window and the people... I know they're real..
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JasmineTheHedgehog
Do you still accept OC's?
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DiamondTheHedgehog
yes, but i won't add chapters in a long time. i don't have time. i'll take your OC though i'll try to add a chapter soon
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on October 22, 2014
Slenderman
Awesome chapter!!
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on September 09, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Awesome!
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on September 08, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Loved it please make more chapthers!
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on September 08, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Wow, this totally gives Jackie's history in Dauntless initiation!
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on September 07, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Love it! 8D! Thanks for adding me in the story! Even though I'm going to be i'm the next chapter! Can't wait for it!
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on September 07, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @JackieTheHedgehog @JeweledOwl812 @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @SwiftElementTheDarkWolf @Yamilettethehedgehog101 I updated Code Diamond!
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Yay I'm gonna read it right now!
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on September 08, 2014
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on September 07, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Great story!
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DiamondTheHedgehog
thanks you
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on September 01, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! XD
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DiamondTheHedgehog
Thanks :3
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on August 22, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
I'll PM you it later
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on August 22, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Thanks!!! Or what exactly? X3
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on August 22, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
Sure! I can add you as a new recruit or.. i have a better idea! *goes into writing lab to write idea*
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on August 22, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Hey... Umm... Can I be in it? I just wanna be part of the awesomeness!!! XD If your gonna add me the names Agent Dark. But you don't need to add me. I'll understand if they're to many people in it allready.
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on August 22, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
No problem! X3
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on August 22, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @GymnasticsBubbleZo @JackieTheHedgehog @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @Yamilettethehedgehog101 100+ READS PEOPLE!!
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Lady_Artemis
OMG SWEET!
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on August 20, 2014
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Slenderman
CONGRATS!!!
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Slenderman
AWESOME!!
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on August 20, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
99 READS GUYS
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on August 20, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome chapter
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on August 18, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Oh yeah Agent Dauntless!
Also, a heads up, there can be times where Jackie will unleash her full Dauntless side, and by that, I mean she doesn't hold ANYTHING back!!
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on August 18, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @GymnasticsBubbleZo @JackieTheHedgehog @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @Yamilettethehedgehog101 I updated Code Diamond! //Jackie, you're in it!
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Lady_Artemis
I love it, and I love the idea where you got Jackie's training from, but you forgot to mention Jackie's Dauntless experience.
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Lady_Artemis
Well maybe I could give you ideas for when writing it. I already know how you could start the chapter off XD
I'll tell you in PM
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on August 21, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
Sure! How would you like to help?
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on August 21, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Maybe I could help, seeming as it will be in MY OC's POV
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on August 21, 2014
Lady_Artemis
LOLOL
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on August 21, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
ok. i think i'll have to make an all jackie's pov chapter XD
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on August 21, 2014
Lady_Artemis
And if you don't know the stages:
Stage 1 is physical combat training.
Stage 2 is about fear hallucinations, and controlling your fears.
Stage 3 is the final test, which is the Fear Landscape (all your worst fears combined, which you face one after the other in one big hallucination)
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on August 20, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
Alright! Awesome
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on August 20, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Details of her initiation you'll need to know:
She was the first jumper (first person to jump down from the roof, into the Dauntless compound itself)
3rd in stage 1 rankings.
1st in stage 2 rankings.
She was invited to join other Dauntless-born initiates to go zip lining from the 100-storey building (all the Dauntless call it the Hancock building) See More▼
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on August 20, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
I'll try to add it in next chapter :3
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on August 18, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
Almost 100 reads!
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on August 17, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
So awesome!
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on August 12, 2014
Lady_Artemis
I love it! I so need more!
Also, sorry to nag and all about this, if it sounds that way, but when will Jackie appear in this?
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DiamondTheHedgehog
i'll try to add her in next chapter.
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on August 12, 2014
Lady_Artemis
If you're gonna make her an agent, I've got 2 selections of code names for you to use.
She can be called either Agent Dauntless or Agent Divergent
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on August 11, 2014
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome chapther please make more
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DiamondTheHedgehog
k. i'm writing some more
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Slenderman
AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
I'm gonna read it right now!
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on August 11, 2014
Slenderman
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
I know it was awesome!
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on August 11, 2014
Slenderman
IKR?!
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on August 11, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
I read it and I loved it!
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on August 11, 2014
Slenderman
Trust me you'll love it.
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on August 11, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
I can't wait to read it
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on August 11, 2014
Slenderman
IT'S AWESOME!!
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DiamondTheHedgehog
@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @GymnasticsBubbleZo @JackieTheHedgehog @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @Yamilettethehedgehog101 I updated Code Diamond!
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on August 11, 2014
Slenderman
LOVED IT!!!! Please right more
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on August 08, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Loved it please make more chapthers!
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DiamondTheHedgehog
Ok I will soon
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on August 04, 2014
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DiamondTheHedgehog
@GymnasticsBubbleZo
@JackieTheHedgehog
@KameoRose
@CamilleTheHedgehog14
@Yamilettethehedgehog101 See More▼
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
I'm gonna read it right now!
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Loved it please make more chapthers!
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on August 03, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
@GymnasticsBubbleZo
@JackieTheHedgehog
@KameoRose
@CamilleTheHedgehog14
@Yamilettethehedgehog101 See More▼
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
yay im gonna read it right now!
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Lady_Artemis
OMG AWESOME!!!
Can I be in this?
If I'm gonna be one of those agent things as well...
I got dibs on either Agent Dauntless or Agent Divergent!
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on July 31, 2014
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Loved it please make more chapthers
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on July 31, 2014
Slenderman
Yah I'm in it!!!
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on July 31, 2014
Slenderman
Wait he calls me starlight or is that someone else's name
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Fiendish_Heathen
That's Your Code Name.
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Slenderman
Ok don't tell me
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on July 31, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
........
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on July 31, 2014
Slenderman
...Come on what the matter?
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on July 31, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Nevermind.
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on July 31, 2014
Slenderman
What's oh mean?
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on July 31, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Oh....
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on July 31, 2014
Slenderman
I just hope the next one I have more than one line. Not that I'm complaining.
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on July 31, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
I Know!!
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on July 31, 2014
Slenderman
Cool I love being an agent!
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on July 31, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
I'm Agent Jewelray.
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on July 31, 2014
Slenderman
Cool I love it!!
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