Deep at sea

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published on July 20, 201520 reads 4 readers 4 not completed
Chapter 1.

An early moning

I woke up at 6:00 a.m. because in 3 hours we are going on our family trip to California! I love California, beautiful beaches and oceans. Can't wait to go! My mom called out from downstairs. " Are you up yet we need to finished packing." "OK" I called back. I started packing my closes and the rest of my stuff. I was all ready, so I went downstairs to see if my mom and the rest of the family was ready. "Mom is everyone ready?" I said to my mom. "Yep we are leaving in a few." she said "kay" I said. A few minutes later we were packing up our stuff in the car.
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snowbeauty16
thanks so much I am making one and I just posed a quiz so you can check it out hope you like it
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on July 31, 2015
The_Cute_Cheetah_Girl
Make more quickly! I love your stories!
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on July 31, 2015
snowbeauty16
thanks i'm working on an even better story and I hope you like turtles because its about TURTLES!
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on July 31, 2015
The_Cute_Cheetah_Girl
Omg I love it!!
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on July 31, 2015