new girl (part 3)

Hey this is part 3 of new girl! Hope you enjoy this awesome story! =^-^=

published on April 29, 201540 reads 12 readers 24 not completed
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Chapter 4.

chapter 4


DREW'S POV.

I burst straight up in my bed, heart pounding, sweat pouring, gasping for air. I pulled oxygen in through my lungs, and if I weren’t on land, I would’ve sworn I went out for a swim. I was soaked in sweat, my boxers clinging to my legs, hair plastered to my whole head. I wiped dripping sweat from my face, groaning.

My stomach lurched, but not like I was going to through up. It twisted and knotted, my heart sinking. Something was wrong. Not with me, but something was. My heart twisted as if Valery broke my heart. I felt sadness seep into me, through my pores making me nothing but a depressed ghost.

Something was wrong.

Hurry. A voice whispered into my ear.

I jumped up from my bed, pulling on yesterday’s jeans and a hoodie. No time for shirts or shoes. I fumbled with my buttons, as I pounded down the hall, swiping my keys of the counter. My mom gave me a bewildered look from the kitchen, as I sprinted to the door.

“Drew?!”

I flung it open, running to my car which was parked at the sidewalk in front of my house. I ran around to the driver’s side, throwing myself in and put the car into drive. I slammed the gas to the floor, peeling away from the sidewalk as my mother ran out, clutching her robe. She yelled something, but I kept going.

I didn’t know where I was going, but I ended up sprinting up Valery’s porch stairs, then her house stairs, my feet thundering against the walls. Alaric sprinted to me, barking wildly. I stopped, kneeling in front of him.

“Alaric! What is it boy, what is it?” I felt desperate to get this sinking feeling out of my stomach.

Alaric gave a huge whine, and grabbed the front of my hoodie, dragging me a few inches. He barks wildly, his eyes wild. He turns and runs into Val’s room. My heart drops.

No. Please, God, no.

Everything becomes slow motion. Why does everything go into slow motion when things go wrong? It takes me a day, a week, a year, to get to her bedroom door. Another year to push the cracked door open. And another for my eyes to work. Another for my lips to work. Another for my feet to work.

But no amount of years could prepare me for this. Not a million years.

She laid on her white carpet, and she looked like a porcelain doll. Her white dress stained red. Her pouty lips as red as her blood. Her white carpet pooled with the dark substance, her paled skin, bleeding. Bleeding. The word echoed in my mind. It moved my feet. It moved my lips. It moved my eyes.

“No!” I screamed, running to her side, dropping down next her. I touch her face, tears streaming down my face. She moans, still alive.

“Oh, God, Valery, baby. Baby, it’s okay.” I suck in air. If I got here faster, if I…God dammit. I hear the garage door open.

“Val, I’m going to get your uncle, okay? Okay? Baby?” My knees started getting soaked with her blood, pooling around her.

I stand, running down the hall, tromping down the stairs. The front door opened. Uncle Riley looked mad as he walked in, seeing me.

“It’s Val,” I gasped, why couldn’t I get the words out fast enough? “She’s…she’s- she’s-”

“Spit out, boy.” He growled, looking at my bloody knees.

“She’s dying! She’s dying!” he looks at me with shock, not moving, “God, dammit! Do something! Call the cops! She’s dying!” I scream at him, I turn, racing back up the stairs, almost tripping. I can’t see, the tears are blinding me.

I come back to her side, she turns her head, looking up at me. She smiled weakly. I cry.

She lifts her hand up, the blood from her wrists on her hand. I don’t care. I bring her hand to my face, putting it to the side of my face, I sob.

“Valery, Val, baby. No.” I feel my heart breaking.

“Drew… I love …you.” She was crying now, too.

“Why? Val, why? Was I not good enough?” I picked her up softly, bringing her in my lap.

“You…were…I wasn’t. I couldn’t do it anymore.” She swallowed, and I saw the struggle in talking, and keeping her eyes open.

“Do what?” It came out harsh. She just smiled.

“Living…Drew, I love you….I love you so much, and when I die, I want you to love someone as much as I love you.” She licked her lips, her eyes half open.

“You’re not going to die, baby.” I sobbed.

“I am. Promise me…promise you’ll love another girl, Drew…” her body started going limp.

“No. I only love you, Val. I don’t want another girl. You’re not going. To. Die.” I shake my head viciously. Uncle Riley comes in, gasping. He runs to her other side, Alaric whines.

“I was already dead.” She dips her head back. I can’t explain this- this pain that I’m going through. I felt something tearing down inside, destroying everything.

“Don’t. Valery, no. Help is on the way. Help is almost here. Please, fight it, Valery. Baby, please.” I cry, rocking her.

Riley cries silently from the side, Alaric keeps whining pathetically.

“I love you.” Her eyes held onto my mine, and I watched the light go out in her grey eyes. Those were her last words.

I screamed and sobbed, shaking her, trying to wake her back up. Trying to wake myself up. This was all just a dream. A nightmare. But I felt harsh hands clutch my shoulders, ripping Valery’s limp body from my grasp, pulling me away from my world. My love. My rock.

And that’s how the world ended.


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ELINAviolets
:-O... *turning into dark elina*... remember I said I wanted to kick that douchbag in the nuts... *evil grin*... Well I change my mind, I want to kick the living day-lights out of him... *creepypasta smile*...
(Shanna: "someone better do something before she actually does it... cauze it ain't gonna be pretty...")
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gothicskittlescupcake
:D okay
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ELINAviolets
It's just proves this series is awesome, and I feel bad since I can't blame it on anyone :(... So I'll just blame it on the guy almost anyone blames something on, EGGMAN
eggman: "wait what-" *gets attacked by a hyper elina*

If you need help or need a almost dead eggman, you know my username :D
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
YOU DIDN'T.... YOU CAN'T... N-NO... It's Allegiant all- all over again! :(( How could you break my heart? YOU CAN'T DO THIS! IT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL FOR AUTHORS TO BREAK THEIR READERS' HEARTS!! NO!!
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gothicskittlescupcake
Sorry...
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gothicskittlescupcake
I'm not saying she is...but I'm still thinking
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
*gasp* I.... am... right! Oh, it's always better when reincarnation gets involved! Oh, thank you thank you thank you I knew she couldn't do that without some redemption... ermah gerd!!!!
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gothicskittlescupcake
Yes it is...and no comment...
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
Wait.. there's a sequel, right? R-right? Yeah, and... Ooh, is Drew going to meet Valery except IN ANOTHER OF HER LIVES? She said she was already dead, but what if she meant that literally? What if she's died before and every time she dies she comes back to life as another girl? ooooooooo
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
The stories you make are so awesome they make me cry tears of awesomeness. Do you know what tears of awesomeness look like? They look like little "
New Girl" books (published) sliding down your face. :D
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gothicskittlescupcake
Thanks!
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
We should write a book TOGETHER!!! We could work on my story called Dragon Something! I forgot what the title was! I finished the first chapter and you can write the second and I can write the third and so on! I'll give you credit, don't worry XD in pm you can tell me the chapter and I will copy and paste it! XD
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
XD We could start a company... a writing company! Called MysticSkittlesCo! And it would sell our books! O.o
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gothicskittlescupcake
That would be awesome and XD
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
We should totally meet in real life and start a writing group.

Problem: That sounded creepy and stalkerish XD
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
No problem ;)
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ELINAviolets
YES you continued it X3
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gothicskittlescupcake
XD I LEFT IT AT A CLIFFHANGER! YOU HAVE TO WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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ELINAviolets
YOU EVIL AWESOME WRITER WITCH, that's mean...
And I'm not even done reading the half of the first chapter since it was only posted 5 minutes ago...
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