The Story Of Starr The Hedgehog (1)

The Story Of Starr The Hedgehog (1)

This is my first story so please no mean comments and if there is anyone you want me to add or you would like to be in the story please tell me. I hope you like it!

published on July 31, 2014235 reads 26 readers 53 not completed
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Chapter 13.

The secret is out

Yamilette's P.O.V

After the boring class, Crimson, Kameo, and I ran to the cafeteria because it was pizza day! We all got in line first and got the first slices of pizza (any pizza you like) and sat at the best table. "Score!" We all said in unison. We laughed and started eating when the new girl, Starr came through the doors looking scared as ever. "Are you okay sis?" Camille ran up to her and asked. "Uh...not exactly." Starr started. After Starr explained everything, everyone was silent. Starr was a demon?! I guess Jackie and Candy were right about her. "SO you ARE a demon! I knew something was wrong with you." Candy shouted. "Its not my fault I'm a freaky monster!" Starr shouted as she ran out the cafeteria crying. "Candy that was a little harsh." Crimson said. "Yeah you could've said that a little nicer." Kameo said. Camille glared at everyone in the room. "Stop talking about my sister like that!" She shouted as she ran out the room. I stayed silent. No way I'm getting involved.

Camille's P.O.V

Ugh! I love my friends dearly. But being mean to my sister really crossed the line. Just because my sister is a demon doesn't mean that she's a freak. And Candy should know better then to blurt that out to not two people, not three, but the ENTIRE school about this. And you knows what Sally could be saying about her. She's always using this kind of stuff to get back on people. That bully...I've gotta check on Starr. But where is she? I just hope Silver doesn't know about any of this...

Silver's P.O.V

I wonder why everyone's acting so shaky today. Sally's been whispering more then usual. And Camille has been walking around the school for an hour or so. I also haven't seen Starr in a while. I hope she's alright...
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FoxInSpace
MOOOOOORRRREEEEE
Can alice the cat be in it? She is a light brown cat wearing a white shirt, grey jacket, grey skirt, and sonic shoes
she also has dark brown hair
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Of course!
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evvvie_s
More! More! More!
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on October 24, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
This is getting so good!!! Please write more!! Also, can Swift be in it? You know, if it isn't much trouble?
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Yes yes she can
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Thanks Starr! :D
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on August 19, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
XD I feel ike the silly one who always plays pranks. This is awesome!
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
XD Thanks!
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Cristallite
Yeah..That was harsh, Crimsons a demon too Candy, Yet you arent like that to her
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evvvie_s
It's because Candy loves Silver too.
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome chapthers please make more :D
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
I shall!
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
That's okay Lol XD
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Ok I've ran out of smiley faces XD
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XxSiderionxX
Awesome story!! Can my oc Sky be in it?
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Absolutely!
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Anytime girl anytime...B)
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XxSiderionxX
Thanks:D
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
awesome picture starr :D
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Oh thank you!
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Hello Yami!
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem ;)
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on August 05, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
:) thanks! Btw, I agree the email thing is super annoying... I hope you fix it soon! Btw cool story :)
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on August 04, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome chapter can my oc yamilett be in it?
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on August 03, 2014
Cristallite
AWESOME!
Could Crimson be in it?
Shes the daughter of Dawn a hedge angel thats a lady of Luxor(made up angel city) and Vladimir a demon that is the main lord of Nightshade(demon city). So shes a demon, her brother Dusk is also a demon and rarely seen
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on August 01, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
LOVE it!!! Please please please please PLEASE write more!!!!! >_<
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on August 01, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
So good! Can Jackie be in this?
Just so you know (in case you forgot) she's the Queen of Dauntless.
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on July 31, 2014
RoseHeart
Immortal mean not mortal and mortal means that you can get sick ad die and stuff like that
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evvvie_s
Can Candy be in it? Maybe they could fight over Silver!
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evvvie_s
Ok! :) But can you put Candy in it?
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Um...but I don't know who would win Silver...if you win it'd hurt me and if I win it would hurt you. I wouldn't want to hurt your feelings...
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesom story :D
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Thank you! I'll make some more tomorrow I feel lazy today XD
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Okay I can't wait to read more tommorrow :D
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ZodiacAnimeFreak
awsome!,also can crystal be in it,after all its her lost siter
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Yeah sure!
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Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome!!
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Thank you
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Fiendish_Heathen
No Problem.
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