The Story Of Starr The Hedgehog (1)

The Story Of Starr The Hedgehog (1)

This is my first story so please no mean comments and if there is anyone you want me to add or you would like to be in the story please tell me. I hope you like it!

published on July 31, 2014238 reads 30 readers 55 not completed
Chapter 1.
Starr's Nightmare...

Starr's Nightmare...

Starr's P.O.V

I was sleeping peacefully in my bed while my sister Janelle was watching TV in her room. When I heard fighting downstairs and thought, "Are my parents fighting again?" I sighed and got out if bed walking downstairs with my Janelle who must've heard them fighting too. But when we got downstairs we didn't see mom, we saw a yellow and purple demon looking creature arguing while dad was on the couch with a gun in his hand. "Mommy?" I said as I rubbed my eyes trying to see of I was dreaming or not. "Darlings, I'm sorry you had to see that. Me and dad just got in a little fight that's all..." Mom said. "I have a gun! That's not a little fight!" Dad yelled still pointing the gun at mom. "You weren't actually planning to kill mom were you dad?" I asked. "He was...but...it wouldn't hurt me anyway because I'm immortal (I hope I'm using that word right XD). Sweeties I'm sorry if I've never told you this but...you're lives are now gonna change because...you are demons." Mom said.

I woke up almost screaming and those words echoed through my head. Then I curled up into a ball and cried. I cried because my mom and my sister Janelle disappeared, my dad is dead, and barely anyone cares! "Why does my life have to be so terrible?!" I yelled.
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FoxInSpace
MOOOOOORRRREEEEE
Can alice the cat be in it? She is a light brown cat wearing a white shirt, grey jacket, grey skirt, and sonic shoes
she also has dark brown hair
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Slenderman
Of course!
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evvvie_s
More! More! More!
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on October 24, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
This is getting so good!!! Please write more!! Also, can Swift be in it? You know, if it isn't much trouble?
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Slenderman
Yes yes she can
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on August 19, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
XD I feel ike the silly one who always plays pranks. This is awesome!
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Slenderman
XD Thanks!
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on August 19, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Yeah..That was harsh, Crimsons a demon too Candy, Yet you arent like that to her
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evvvie_s
It's because Candy loves Silver too.
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on August 10, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome chapthers please make more
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Slenderman
I shall!
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on August 10, 2014
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Slenderman
XD
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on August 10, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
That's okay Lol XD
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on August 10, 2014
Slenderman
Ok I've ran out of smiley faces XD
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Siderion
Awesome story!! Can my oc Sky be in it?
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Slenderman
Absolutely!
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Slenderman
XD
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on August 10, 2014
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Slenderman
Anytime girl anytime...
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on August 10, 2014
Siderion
Thanks
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
awesome picture starr
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Slenderman
Oh thank you!
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on August 10, 2014
Slenderman
Hello Yami!
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on August 05, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
thanks! Btw, I agree the email thing is super annoying... I hope you fix it soon! Btw cool story
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on August 04, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome chapter can my oc yamilett be in it?
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on August 03, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
AWESOME!
Could Crimson be in it?
Shes the daughter of Dawn a hedge angel thats a lady of Luxor(made up angel city) and Vladimir a demon that is the main lord of Nightshade(demon city). So shes a demon, her brother Dusk is also a demon and rarely seen
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on August 01, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
LOVE it!!! Please please please please PLEASE write more!!!!! >_<
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on August 01, 2014
Lady_Artemis
So good! Can Jackie be in this?
Just so you know (in case you forgot) she's the Queen of Dauntless.
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on July 31, 2014
RoseHeart
Immortal mean not mortal and mortal means that you can get sick ad die and stuff like that
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on July 31, 2014
evvvie_s
Can Candy be in it? Maybe they could fight over Silver!
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evvvie_s
Ok! But can you put Candy in it?
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Slenderman
Sure!
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Slenderman
Um...but I don't know who would win Silver...if you win it'd hurt me and if I win it would hurt you. I wouldn't want to hurt your feelings...
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesom story
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Slenderman
Thank you! I'll make some more tomorrow I feel lazy today XD
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Okay I can't wait to read more tommorrow
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ZodiacAnimeFreak
awsome!,also can crystal be in it,after all its her lost siter
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Slenderman
Yeah sure!
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Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome!!
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Slenderman
Thank you
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Fiendish_Heathen
No Problem.
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FallingRozePetals
Awwww. Thats sad! I will rate 5 stars cause it your first Story
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Slenderman
Thank you and yes my OC had a bad past
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