Mystic Charm

Mystic Charm

This is an ongoing chapter Fantasy Story involving magic, and more. This tells the quest of 'angels', which in this story are female mages. It has romance, drama, and action. I've drawn it in a manga like style, but I'm converting it to stories for Qfeast.

published on April 07, 20159 reads 6 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 3.

The Mystic Charm Training Facility

"Last stop, for all the students going to the training facility"! Mei slowly got off, she couldn't stop thinking about the old woman. "Whooa!" Mei shouted almost tripping on the stairs of the bus. A stranger caught her. She had sandy-brown hair tied back, and was wearing teal short-shorts, a black belt, and a teal tube top. "Hey, you almost tripped!" The girl said. Mei replied "Oh, I'm Mei I'm starting first year". "Well I'm Kara....Oh, hey I'm a first year too"! Mei was glad to meet someone. "Hey, Kara want to walk in together". "Well, alright I don't know anyone here, and I can tell you don't either". Mei's powers were telling her something again. It turns out Kara was looking for someone to befriend. The two walked inside the facility. The head of the building was waiting, along with 2 other assistants.
    "Kara seems nice, I just wish I could control my powers though". "There sure is a lot of people in here. That guy over there is hot I want to go sit by him". Mei was lost in thought again. "Mei come on!" Kara said with a pull to Mei's arm. "Let's sit over there". Mei said pointing to the guy she called hot. Kara nodded in agreement, and walked with Mei. They both sat down, and Mei was nervous. The guy was just sitting there he had black hair, and mysterious green eyes. Mei caught herself looking, and then looked away. He smiled a little when he saw Mei look at him.
     The Head of the training school Ms.Halio spoke "Settle down first year students, please come get your dorm assignments, then I will go over school locations, and rules. "You and another of your gender will share a big bedroom, and you two, and three, or four other roommatedof your same gender will share a large apartment, now come get your dorm information". As mei went to grab her dork information papers Kara came over and said "Yee!....We're roommates! Mei had a big smile on her face that told Kara that she was just as excited. "Ooh....We share an apartment with Ami, Mariah, Melody, Stiecy, Brittanie, Meicee, Keiko, Erika, and Cassadee. Ami, and Erika are my friends. You'd like Ami she's a little bold, and really loyal. She's a great friend, and natural leader. It takes a little while to get used to Erika. She's sassy, and outgoing. I don't know the others, but I heard Cassadee, and Keiko are new  here from a ways away. Keiko's home Yukios is near Beachow, where you're from". Once Kara finished Mei replied "Yeah". with little interest. She felt a strong emotion coming from the back of the assembly room,
    "Hey, Mei I'm going to check out the dorm, you should come to". "No Kara, I'll be there in a minute. After the conversation was cut to an unexpected end Mei head where her powers took her. A young man was upset. Mei could tell he was crying on the inside. 'Hey, are you alright?" Mei asked with a great deal of concern. Mei thought he was kind of cute. After standing there for a while she thought he really was....
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OFthePAGE
Its a really cool story (story tip...hope you dont mind... your charaters are super well developed, but try working on the ebb and flow of the story plot and story details):)
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on April 08, 2015