Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

This is the story of a young hedgehog. Torn apart from her parents when she was young, all she's known in life is one little room she's been trapped in, and torture and abuse. All she wishes for in life is to get away from her abuser and live free. Will it ever come true?

published on June 06, 2014146 reads 33 readers 16 not completed
Chapter 1.
Prologue: Torn Apart

Prologue: Torn Apart

*This chapter is told in 3rd person. All other chapters will be told from someone's point of view.*

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Search around for a town in Mobius, and you'll find a town named Trandyl. Believe it or not, Trandyl was unlike other towns in Mobius. It was a quiet and peaceful town, with no rubbish in sight. Everyone was friendly, and always kept their promises. And one couple in particular.
Jessica and Matthew were one of the kindest couples to ever live in Trandyl. And because of this, they were offered a lot of support. Why, you may ask? Well, Jessica was expecting a baby girl, who the couple decided to name Layla.
But deep in the outskirts of Trandyl, a green hedgehog lurked. He kept a close eye on Jessica and Matthew, waiting for the day their Layla was born.

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And Layla was successfully born. A healthy hedgehog with red fur, and cream muzzle. Her spines acted as her hair, and her emerald green eyes glistened in the dark. Layla was loved throughout the town of Trandyl.
But that night, the same hedgehog who lurks in the shadows of the outskirts broke into the house, and stole the baby. No one saw Layla ever since that night. All day and all night the parents and their friends searched for little Layla, but no one could find her anywhere.
For on the outskirts, the green hedgehog, Tye, held Layla as his hostage. Layla was locked inside a small room with no window, and only a small mattress on the floor.

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(I apologise for this chapter being so short, but I promise that the other chapters will be longer.)
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toughwolf3
NOOO11
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on June 09
SmolBeanie696
Can u write more and add me PWEAZE?!
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on June 27, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Whoa.... It took you a long time to make the next chap xD but it's nice.. :3
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on February 02, 2015
DiamondTheHedgehog
Awesome story! Can u add me?
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on August 11, 2014
Lady_Artemis
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on June 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Thank you for adding me!
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on June 06, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
I can't wait for chapter 4! If it's OK with you can my OC be part of the story? You know if it's OK with you.
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on June 06, 2014
Lady_Artemis
I am writing more MD, and yeah I'm taking OC's. That's why I decided to include FandomLover's OC, Eli.
Do you want Dawn to be part of the Freedom Fighters???
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on June 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Please write more! Tell me if you accept OC's. It's okay if you don't.
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on June 06, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
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on June 06, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Awesome
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on June 06, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Can't Wait For Third Chapter
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on June 06, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
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on June 06, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Log the story! :,)
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