The Forest

The Forest

This story is about a girl named Alice. She is soon turning 13 years old. While moving in and getting settled she finds a book that unlocks the truth about Goldfinch. And witnesses a horror that she will never forget

published on November 21, 201478 reads 72 readers 30 completed
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Chapter 3.

Weeks

Weeks past. Someone was walking by the house and saw that the door was open. As  they were walking up to the house they could smell a rotting smell. When they walked into the house to see if anyone was home. That's when I heard a scream the person say the blood and guts and bodies all over the floor. They started to call the cops of a murder. Two hours later the cops came and started to investigate. The saw the family picture and saw through they were missing me.  That's when things started to get weird. The cops believed I did it. So I told myself that I would never go back to that house or even remember what I have seen and been though.

Days soon weeks then months past still no resolution. As I thought,  I decided to get out of town and start fresh. As a new murderer  who wanted revenge on my family and revenge for me.
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lalalooloo
:D awesome
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on November 25, 2014
BenDrowned2
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on November 23, 2014
millionraindrops
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on November 22, 2014
ZeldaLink
Goldfinch is so different...I like it
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on November 22, 2014
lollypop1
This horror story is amazing! Keep it up
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on November 22, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I really really like it!! :) please keep it up!
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IIWolfieII
? OK..thxs for the advice
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DarkAngel1204
Advice? Lol your welcome
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
IIWolfieII
Thank you for the positive comments ??
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on November 22, 2014
kitty234
Awesome
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IIWolfieII
Thank you kitty
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on November 22, 2014
kitty234
Great work
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IIWolfieII
Thx
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
fearless1
'.' I saw this on hygiene now and this story is really good
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IIWolfieII
Really?
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on November 22, 2014
fearless1
Hot now*
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
tabbydbej
Keeps up the superb job
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IIWolfieII
???? ok
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
zoey1011
I like this type of horror story. Keep doing great
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IIWolfieII
Thx
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
underdog23
This story really gets to me It's like a creepypasta. Keep up the great work
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IIWolfieII
Yea I guess so. But I didn't put that much detail on the murderer or anything It's just a short story
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
goofywe
Wonderful ???
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IIWolfieII
You think?
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
foxygirl23
I like this story. Keep up the good work
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IIWolfieII
Thank you
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
taykk
I like this story It's like a twist at the end to me
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IIWolfieII
Haha thxs
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
IIWolfieII
Please comment if you moved it,???
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IIWolfieII
Woved. Not moved woved
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on November 21, 2014
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on November 21, 2014