The Forest

The Forest

This story is about a girl named Alice. She is soon turning 13 years old. While moving in and getting settled she finds a book that unlocks the truth about Goldfinch. And witnesses a horror that she will never forget

published on November 21, 201480 reads 74 readers 30 completed
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Chapter 2.

Never Again

While I am thinking in my head adding up all the details and what's been happening to me. I had feeling in my gut that I needed to go back to that house for that book. Because something was telling me that book had the truth, about what's going on around here in Goldfinch. So as I was think about what I should carry with me into that house I saw a black rusty rench. So when I took my first step back into the house,  there was blood all over the walls, my family picture smashed on the ground into one hundred peaces. I had to cover my mouth and nose so I didn't scream and smell the blood and guts all over the floor and steps. As I was walking by all the blood and guts, there was..that looked like three finger markings going up the stairs side wall. As I followed it,  it lead me to my room. I got my rench really to swing at whatever was in my room, but there was nothing there. Or so I thought.

As I tried reaching for the gray book my mirror had bloody writing saying " Your time is up" so I grabbed the book and rushed down the stairs but only leading to the unbarrable horror that lied before me. My mom and dads heads were being held by the guy. He had a axe in his hand saying in a deep dark voise "Your time is up". As I tried running again he threw the axe,  as I was running it landed by the door, I screamed and didn't look back and started running even faster and I said in my head "Never,Never again shall I go back there"

Instead of going into town I ran into the forest and climb up a tall tree and sat there. While all these emotions go through my head about why just happened to me,  something sparked in my nonscheduled I started twiching and laughing, dropping the book. Saying out loud YOU'RE GONNA BE SORRY YOU DID THAT YOU LITTLE BASTERD!!!! THIS weird feeling made me want to kill and only kill. Get revenge for my family because I was thinking why the fudge would he do this why would he want to hurt me and kill my loved ones!! As I was saying and thinking this I found a knife laying under some leaves,  so I jumped down from the tree to pick it up, so I put it in my black goodies pocket. As I was walking I found a almost empty bottle of beer. So I picked it you and started drinking it trying to forget everything and must want revenge.
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lalalooloo
awesome
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on November 25, 2014
BenDrowned2
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on November 23, 2014
millionraindrops
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on November 22, 2014
ZeldaLink
Goldfinch is so different...I like it
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on November 22, 2014
lollypop1
This horror story is amazing! Keep it up
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on November 22, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I really really like it!! please keep it up!
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IIWolfieII
😲 OK..thxs for the advice
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DarkAngel1204
Advice? Lol your welcome
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
IIWolfieII
Thank you for the positive comments 😌😁
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on November 22, 2014
kitty234
Awesome
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IIWolfieII
Thank you kitty
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on November 22, 2014
kitty234
Great work
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IIWolfieII
Thx
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
fearless1
'.' I saw this on hygiene now and this story is really good
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IIWolfieII
Really?
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on November 22, 2014
fearless1
Hot now*
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
tabbydbej
Keeps up the superb job
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IIWolfieII
πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š ok
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
zoey1011
I like this type of horror story. Keep doing great
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IIWolfieII
Thx
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
underdog23
This story really gets to me It's like a creepypasta. Keep up the great work
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IIWolfieII
Yea I guess so. But I didn't put that much detail on the murderer or anything It's just a short story
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
goofywe
Wonderful πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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IIWolfieII
You think?
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
foxygirl23
I like this story. Keep up the good work
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IIWolfieII
Thank you
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
taykk
I like this story It's like a twist at the end to me
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IIWolfieII
Haha thxs
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
IIWolfieII
Please comment if you moved it,😱😱😣
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IIWolfieII
Woved. Not moved woved
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on November 21, 2014
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