The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 201359 reads 8 readers 5 completed
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Chapter 4.

Chapter 3: New Job

"Who the hell are you?" Jack demanded "Where is Farrah?"
"Your girlfriend is dead," Thw first man said, "The man who attacked you killed her."
"Let me out of this bed!" Jack yelled. "I'll kill that son of a bitch!"
"You can't," the second man said. "Not without training"
"What the hell are you talking about?" Jack demanded. "I'm a martial artist."
"I am Jon Lennox," The first man said. "This is Morgan Reedus. We are in a secret organization that hunt the paranormal and supernatural."
"Not even the government knows about us," Morgan added.
"Hunting the supernatural?" Jack asked. "You have got to be joking."
"We are not," Jon said. "Vampires, demons, werewolves, the all exist. We are the reason you dont see them. Because we hunt them down. You and your girlfriend were attacked by a demon by the name of Azazel. But before you can face demons and avenge yur girl, there are other things for you to fight first."
"You will be assigned a partner," Morgan continued. "Your partner will help you get better. You are going to learn from our very best."
"Hold it," Jack said. "I have agreed to nothing. I have not agreed to join your group."
Jack stood up. He looked out the window. He thought about Farrah and all the times they were together. He thought about Azazel and how much he wanted to tear Azazel apart.
"Ok," Jack said. "I'm in. As long as I can get my hands on that good for nothing bastard."
"Lets go," Morgan said.
They led Jack out of the hospital. Jack had no idea where they were taking him. He didnt care what happend as long as he could fight Azazel.
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Dresden
I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013