The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 201359 reads 8 readers 5 completed
Chapter 1.


This is my latest story that has been redone countless times. It is about a Las Vegas living man, Jack Lee, who ends up becoming a hunter. Once he does he teams up with Vanessa Marshals, the deadliest woman in the world, and together they hunt vampires, demons, and more. Some very special Horror movie icons will be in this story. so for a disclaimer: i own nothing in this story except original characters. With that said i would love to give a shout out to 3 people on qfeast XXxSilentHopexXX, Bella101, and Alice101. You girls are amazing. Now i will list the characters that will appear in this story.

1. Jack Lee (original character)
2. Vanessa Marshals (original character, XXxSilentHopexXX)
3. Alison Johnson (OC Bella101)
4. Jon Lonnox (OC)
5. Morgan Reedus (OC)
6. Lucifer, The Devil
7. Dracula
8. Slenderman
9. Pinhead (Hellraiser)
10. Jason (Friday the 13th)
11. Michael the arch angel
12. Gabriel (angel)
13. Freddy (Nightmare on elm st.)
14. Alma Wade (F.E.A.R.)
15. Lilith (lucifer's daughter)
16. Azazel (yellow eyed demon)
17. Harald (Harald & Dave OC)
18. Dave (Harald & Dave OC)
19. Alice Flesh (Alice101 OC)
20. Medusa

There may be more characters as this story progresses. If you wish to be in this story, send me a message, or write on my wall, or comment. Give me the name of ur character, weapons you want, what your character looks like, is he/she with or against Jack Lee, and what is he/she, human, vampire, demon? etc. give me that info and you will most likely be in this story.
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Comments (5)

I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
on March 27, 2013