promise (1)

promise (1)

Well Its not a story but its a song(my own song).hope you like it. Its about a person who had lost his/her hopes and after a while he gains strength and promises to never let go of his/her dreams

published on March 27, 201316 reads 10 readers 11 completed
promise

promise

I think I'm living
I think I can see it
Whenever I close my eyes.
It seems so real
I don't wanna wake up
I don't wanna look up
I can almost feel
that I'm reaching it
Whenever I wake up
Everything is so dark
Just wanna leave this world
But I dont know how
Everyone is killing
Everyone is dying
My heart is breaking
whenever I see it
I just wanna close my eyes
And just live my life
I just wanna dream it
this way I can feel it
when I open my eyes
I'm falling behind
I will never wakeup
I will never look up.
I don't wanna loose my hopes
So Im gonna move on
I just want u to take my hands
And show me which way is that
then I can move on
And I won't let you down
I think I'm living
And I'm gonna live it
I will never let u down
I promise
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Comments (11)

musicfan
I don't know why but I can't stop reading this song
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on May 13, 2014
secretgirl
thanks
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on April 18, 2014
runningbay
Oh my goodness that's so good !! Write more I loved that !!!!!
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on April 12, 2014
secretgirl
Thanks
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on May 13, 2013
ImJustin
wow I think you really are talented
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on May 12, 2013
secretgirl
Thanks to all of you reading this
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on April 20, 2013
nadiarz
your amazing.
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on April 20, 2013
musicfan
Wow your so talented
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on April 18, 2013
music.lover99
I love it
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on April 11, 2013
secretgirl
Thank you XXxsilenthope2xXX
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on March 27, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Very good and well written.
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on March 27, 2013