Some people love...Some people die...

Some people love...Some people die...

THis is the story about a girl called Carla, who has fallen in love with a mysterious, blondie, her boyfreinds brother, one night, the night of the murder, she starts seeing things differently.

published on March 24, 201368 reads 30 readers 12 completed
Chapter 1.

Decisions, decisions...

My feet squelch on the shimmering, tiled floor. Squelch Squelch. My mind races as I brace myself for the sight that is yet to come. Squelch. I fiddle with the tacky earing on my ear. I'm being followed. The room where he's in pops into view, and my heart bursts with longing as I run towards the door. Someone's following me. Someone grabs my hand before I can grasp the doorknob, someone pushes me back and I see that someone.

"Shay?" He grins and flicks his tousled hair back, "The one and only!"I try to go for a grin but it falters before it reaches my lips. Which are now tingling. "Let me take you home." His arm snakes around my shoulder. "NO! Your brother's in that room, unconcious. Your brother, my boyfreind!" A frown slowly spreads on Shay's face, "but I thought you told him..." "How can I now?" I sigh, raking my thick, brown hair with my fingers. Before I can reach out for the door again, I feel something soft land on my lips, something as soft and smooth as velvet. Shay runs his hands down my back while a series of long, delicous kisses rains on me. I tugg him closer and slam him into the opposite wall, it feels so good I'm unable to stop. A delighted groan escaped the edges of my lips.

"Oh."
A voice makes us spring apart. There in front of us is a pained looking Jake, with his leg in a crutch, his arm in a sling and his head bandaged. Oh crapp oh crapp oh crapp. My boyfreind saw me making out with his brother. My boyfreind who almost died in a car crash 2 days ago. "Jake!" He falls backwards onto the hard floor and I hear a faint crack, 3 nurses rush from around the corner towards him and block me from reaching him.

"HOW COULD YOU?" I swivel towards Shay and a minute later his cheek is a shade of vibrant crimson and my hand stings from the slap. "It was as much your fault as it was mine" he mumbles and although I push him away, I know it's true. I did kiss him back.
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Comments (12)

soccergirl01
amazin' book keep writing!
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on January 13, 2014
The_Astute_Potterhead
Omg amazing book
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on December 26, 2013
girlonfire
new book posted x
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on October 30, 2013
girlonfire
I'll try, but i'll have 2 make another book rather than editing this sorry x
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on October 28, 2013
girlonfire
Kk -will write more x
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on October 28, 2013
purplepony3
please write more cause this story isn't gonna get commented on again cause it is no longer at the top and there are probably more than 4 people who want more just some didn't comment
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on October 27, 2013
girlonfire
almost. x
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on July 01, 2013
fleur22045
Do make more!
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on March 28, 2013
girlonfire
Thanx, that was 3 comments so far (not counting mine) 2 more and hopefuly more plz, tell ur freinds, spread etc thx xx
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on March 25, 2013
purplepony3
Please write more it was great!
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on March 25, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Good choice of words in this. Very well written and very good. Rated five stars =)))
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on March 25, 2013
girlonfire
Commentz plz x
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on March 24, 2013