4. A.M.

4. A.M.

Ok, I came up with this poem last night as well when I couldn't sleep. The song, "4 A.M.", by Melanie Fiona gave me this idea and I give credit to Melanie Fiona for making the best song ever!

published on March 20, 201327 reads 25 readers 9 completed
4 A.M.

4 A.M.

Ok, my friend told me that this poem may not be appropriate to be put on here, but the way I see it, it's my work. I created it and if someone doesn't like it, they shouldn't read it. I write dark poems because that's the only thing I know how to write. Dark poems are something I know I can write, so I suggest if you don't like dark poems, don't read this, but if you like to read it, please go ahead. Hope you guys like. Remember, I got this idea from a song, "4 A.M." by Melanie Fiona.


Sitting here all alone
In the dark,
I have a knife in my hand
That's ready to leave another mark.

Tears are streaming down my face.
As I think of where he could be.
When I think of that one place
I think he's with her, the girl that wants to be me.

I place the knife down
and reach over for the bottle of wine.
I take a sip, and then another.
Then I began to feel fine.

Something is taking over me
I don't know what
I suddenly find myself reaching for the knife
And it's leaving another cut.

A picture of him and her together in bed.
I start to cry.
Another pleasure feeling is washing over me
And I now know this isn't a lie.

I finally found the truth
I see it in my head
There having sexual intercourse
In my bed.

Yes! That's what there doing!
I hear their screams of pleasure
But it won't last long
Because what I'm about to do, it's going to take some serious measures.

It's four O' clock in the morning.
I had my few drinks and fun.
Now it's time to end this.
Because this is the last straw, I'm done!

With a forty five in my hand
I know it's full of lead
When I fire two shots
They'll both be dead.

And all of this happened at 4 A.M.
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Comments (9)

bluebear0914
good but creepy.
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on August 20, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw
I only write dark poems, too! :D
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on May 01, 2015
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Amazing, and yet dark, sad, depressing...and awesome!!:)
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on May 06, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
Amazingly awesome! Enough is said. (:
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on April 13, 2013
Gisselle
I like it

(0)(0) <- it's watching you
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on April 12, 2013
Nobody.07
I have the same comment as your other poem, 'Leave Me Alone': Just wonderful :) I really enjoy reading your poems! I, too, prefer dark poems.
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on April 10, 2013
secretgirl
Great
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on March 31, 2013
LexiCha
O_o
........Cool...........
but still no comment. Lol
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on March 30, 2013
EmoLover16
Nice and depressing...i can relate
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on March 22, 2013