Try Hard

Try Hard

One girl. Four boys. They will all compete to win the girl's attention - but do they end up trying too hard each time? A 5 Seconds of Summer fan fiction. Though you don't need to know who they are to understand it! ;)

published on July 11, 201483 reads 23 readers 46 not completed
Chapter 1.
Prologue (Luke's P.O.V.)

Prologue (Luke's P.O.V.)

"This next one is called Try Hard!" I call out to the crowd of screaming fans.
As we start to play, I remember our inspiration for this song. Well, how could I forget her? Not only was the the reason we wrote Try Hard, but she was the girl who changed our lives - and nearly tore the band apart.

Beautiful, but deadly.

A/N: To my new readers, welcome! To my Heartbreak Girl readers, welcome back! :D

Hello! Thank you for taking the time to read this story of mine. I really hope that you will enjoy it! :D :D


For the Heartbreak Girl readers: I'm thinking about doing the teaser thing again. Should I? And if you have any questions, feel free to ask! :D
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Lady_Artemis
WOOHOO MORE'S FINALLY OUT!!!
NOW WRITE MORE!!!
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on August 11, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
WRRRRREIIIIITTTEEEE MMMOOOORRFEEEE
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on August 08, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Thx 4 updating!
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swageyamatobiyolo
Aw you're lovely!! I'm so sorry that I didn't update for ages though!!!
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MockingjayDistrict
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED A HAPPY ENDING FOR LUREN NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on July 31, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I'm good either way
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on July 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It sounds like a great idea, as long as there's Luren! I like this story, but that fic sounds great!
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swageyamatobiyolo
Thanks!! I'll make a poll about it now!
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
Lady_Artemis
That sounds like a good idea Ari.
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swageyamatobiyolo
Thank you!!
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more soooln
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swageyamatobiyolo
I won't be able to update tomorrow, Sunday or Monday.
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on July 18, 2014
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MockingjayDistrict
OMG I felt so bad reading that chapter! Poor Luke!!!!!
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swageyamatobiyolo
I know!
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swageyamatobiyolo
Thank you so much!! I feel like this story is so bad though...
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on July 18, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It's a good chapter in writing though! Super descriptive!
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CrystalDiamond2323
WRITE MOOREEEEE
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on July 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Omigod I'M GOING TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ship Luren so much, FIX THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Other than that, you're a really good writer!
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MockingjayDistrict
It's okay!
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on July 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Maybe it is! Well along with Percabeth, Romione, Aryagon, Keeta, Jiper, Fourtris, Hinny, Rorina, Nasuatagh, Luville, and other ship names!
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on July 15, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
Haha, it's like Luren is one of your favourite words!!
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on July 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Forever and ever! LUREN LUREN LUREN
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on July 15, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
We're still Luren shipping buddies, right??
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MockingjayDistrict
Your *sniff sniff * welcome.
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swageyamatobiyolo
Aw, sorry!!
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swageyamatobiyolo
Aw, thanks!!
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CrystalDiamond2323
Awesome!!!! Write more soon!
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on July 14, 2014
Lady_Artemis
AWWWW SO CUTE!!!!!!!!
I AM TOTALLY INTO THIS!!!
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swageyamatobiyolo
Thank you so much!!
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on July 14, 2014
razzberri
This is my OC:
Name: Jen
Age: 63
She is: Calum's grandmother

She is very sweet to everyone, and does generous acts of kindness. For example, she made a really delicious cake for Calum and the other 5sos boys, for after one of their concerts. Her hobbies include knitting, sewing, reading, and puzzles. Plus she's a wonderful cook!
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razzberri
I hope she can be in the story!! Sorry that she's probably a weird character...
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swageyamatobiyolo
I do like your idea! I would have never thought of creating a character like her!!
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on July 17, 2014
razzberri
You really think so?? I just thought it might be interesting to include an older relative of his... I hope you really do like my idea....
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on July 17, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
Oh, no, it's okay!! She's different, and that's really cool!!
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CrystalDiamond2323
Can I have an OC?
Name: Lindsey
Age: same as others
Personality: funny, talkative, sarcastic, outgoing
Hobbies: art related stuff, writing, meeting new friends See More▼
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swageyamatobiyolo
I'll include her when I can!
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MockingjayDistrict
Awesome! I loved Heartbreak Girl, I'm glad you're writing more! Continue with the teasers, and if you accept OC's than you already know my info!
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swageyamatobiyolo
Thank you so much!! And are you saying she would be Ally's best friend?
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MockingjayDistrict
You can choose what Dawn is.
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on July 12, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
You can change who she is if you want, because you guys won't be finding out much about Ally...
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on July 12, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
You can decide.
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on July 11, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Awesome!!!!
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swageyamatobiyolo
Thank you!!
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